Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Hello! Hello!

Wonderful! First feedback! (I’ve over here being excited about crazy things like this)

Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us.

Yes, I am going for a darker stage.

Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be…

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@linus-smallprint

Okay, okay, I also had it on while reading, and I was…… underwhelmed…….. To put it gently.

It just feels like the difference between a wind up music box and watching the Danish National Symphony. There just wasn’t any heart and character behind it! The music didn’t feel alive to me.

Well, there’s my honest opinion.

@linus-smallprint

No comment on the soundtrack…? 😏

I couldn’t think of anything un-scathing to say.

@grcr

Yes, if the others are wanting to draw something this time. You can tag them and ask.

Or I can….

@mineralizedwritings  @rae  @linus-smallprint   @keilah-h @loopylin  @highscribeofaetherium

Are any of y’all in interested in extending the deadline, or are you just not going to be doing this character at all?

@linus-smallprint That was beautiful!! One question though, how far is this in the book? Are we nearing the end, or does Alan still have some character development to do (maybe sharing this great news with his friends….?)

also the soundtrack was amazing, I had it on in the background while I was reading. It really does fit!

@linus-smallprint

Finally. I’ve been really looking forward to this chapter. It was good timing too. This was the point in Alan’s life when he was ready. The line “He didn’t need to become that hero, for The Saviour had been that hero for him.” is truly quotable.

Just one small thing.

You start the sentence:

After a little more hesitation. D…

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@linus-smallprint

Cool! Nice to meet you. My dad works in software : )

Yeah, it’s weird how we’re all Americans lol. My sisters writing forum has a lot of Europeans.

I like the sound of the narrow path trilogy! I love crows, my other penname is actually Corvuss. I get that feeling, my book was heavily influenced by the city of ember and I…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Oh.

Well……..

It’s not much of a challenge without other contestants………

@mineralizedwritings  @rae  @linus-smallprint   @keilah-h @loopylin

Any of y’all planning on doing this one?

@whalekeeper

This is great!! I love this!

I’ll tag a few more people in case they’re interested.

@koshka @power @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @elishavet-pidyon

(Look up there at Whaley’s post)

@linus-smallprint

November 1st would be fine. Just don’t be surprised if it sometimes takes me a couple of days to read the sections you post. I might just drop them into a document on my phone so I can read them while taking the LRT to school.

No prob. Take the time you need.

@linus-smallprint

Warning: you may want to prepare for a lore dump when The Cost Draft 2 is done.) I’m just realizing this question is not very easy to answer from the other side.

Oh dear. lol.  I shall be prepared.

wonderful! These are the questions answered (I think?) but it’s nice to have them written out and to also know that my reader is…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

So that’s Darrian’s backstory. I don’t recall anything about this in the story.

Yeah, it was in there, about a paragraph, same time you got Noah’s backstory.

Ahhhh, never thought about pulling in the nobleman “Separation” He was thrown out when he was sixteen. So….. four years ago.

I’m really liking this. This is perfe…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

This isn’t really a meme, but I thought it was such a cool observation! Your sis might like this.

@linus-smallprint

I LOVE the Little House books!

@linus-smallprint

I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.

I was just telling my little sister that she NEEDS to read those books.

@mineralizedwritings

New people: Andrew ( @raxforge ), Kefa ( @the_lost-journal ), Ellette ( @ellette-giselle ), Linus ( @Linus-smallprint ), Shadow ( @theshadow ), Liberty ( @liberty ), Ducktator ( @theducktator )

I’ll let them introduce themselves if they so wish.

@linus-smallprint

OH. MY. GOODNESS.

This was like a treasure!!!! Oh this is so, so good! I can already see some scenes where I can add all of this stuff in/strengthen it.

Ardentan’s betraying the church……………. Someone’s quick on the draw………… tho I may have intended to save that one……….

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@linus-smallprint

Oh boy! Starting it right now!!!! Can’t wait!!!

I haven’t proofread this too carefully, so there may be some questionable grammar mistakes

*sigh* There always is my Canadian friend.

LOLOLOLOL!

(Actually, I enjoy your non American grammar. lol)

@linus-smallprint

The Wilderking Trilogy by Jonathan Rogers is an allegorical story on the life of David, with some twists thrown in. (And a completely different world.) It’s got some great humor in it! I would recommend.