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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
Okay Linus, I put that part in that you suggested. I plan on having it just after Stephen and David bring their friends, and I left part of that in this section so you can get the flow. I hope this fixes the problem you mentioned.
Thoughts Anyone?
&n…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore @loopylin @theshadow @keilah-h @rae @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @theducktator @esther-c @liberty
Is it bad that this scene came to mind and I smiled with evil glee?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
it’s kinda our Thanksgiving/Christmas vacation. I’m actually in the car on the way back right now.
lol. Everyone asks for word count, and I never know. I measure books by pages when I read, so I naturally do the same for writing. Let me get back to you on that tomorrow when I can look it up on my laptop.
i edited the book until I l…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
My dad is the same, he’ll eat the spotted bananas. I’m just like “go ahead and take it, I’m not gonna eat it” cause I don’t like the taste and texture once they’re overripe
My brother only eats yellow ones. Not too brown, not too green.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I hope school writing counts for this.
“Oh lovely snowball packed with care, smack a head that’s unaware! Then with freezing ice to spare, melt and soak through underwear! Fly straight and true, hit hard and square! This, oh snowball, is my prayer. I only throw consecrated snowballs.” -Calvin and Hobbes
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
hey, has your sister tried to start an account here?
we have a new member called Mountain Maiden, but her profile is empty. No picture, no bio, no background, no posts. I tried messaging her but never got an answer, I was wondering if that was your sis and her welcome email went to spam or something. 🤷🏼♀️I may be wrong. I…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Congrats to your sister! Looks like the perfect Christmas present for myself….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
well, thank you for the encouragement. I may be a silly emotional person, but your last post just made me feel like this might not be as bad as it looks. ☺️
I know you’re not a know it all. You’re just smart, know what you’re doing as a fellow author, and have an outside view of the story, so you’re probably rarely going t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
well, I feel like Alan’s choice to A.) step away from magic, and B.) (the most important thing) follow God, (the Saviour) has been fair sailing. What did it cost him? Things are a little tense with Tyn, but that’s always been the case for one reason or the other. He hasn’t lost friends, he hasn’t lost freedom, he hasn’t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
thats awesome!!! I’ll have to get a copy!!
I really hope she gets a scout soon! I would love to meet her! -
TheShadow replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
That’s great, congratulations to your sister!! That’s really awesome, thank you for telling us. I’ll make sure to get it asap.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
btw, why isn’t the new Alan in your art collection?!?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae @esther-c @theducktator @the_lost-journal @calyhuge @koshka @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
Well, the deadline is passed, so I think I’m gonna judge the three stories that were submitted.
in particular order……
COME ON YOU TWO! SHUT UP AND GET OUT OF THERE!
Okay Linus, now I’m mad.
I KNEW IT! I knew he was going to try to convince Alan to go back to magic, I just didn’t know why, or that it was such a big deal!
You have me a little panicked and thoroughly intrigued.You foretold this well and set the stage in a solid and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
*sobbing because I feel overwhelmed.*
*Takes a deep breath*
Okay. I get it. You’re right.
Again.
I actually thought I was getting somewhere, and we are hardly a quarter of the way through the Doc!
Okay, I’ll tackle this next week because I’m out of town over the weakened. It’ll give me some time to think.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Ah, makes sense about Andrew.
Don’t do it, Joseph. Look where growing depressed when comparing one’s self to others is getting Eric Humler!
Yeah, you tell him. (I find it so funny that our characters have similar traits and struggles. I was totally thinking of your Eric when I was editing this scene.)
I feel like you are mov…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Happy Thanksgiving everyone! I drew the Over the Garden Wall brothers in celebration.
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