Linus Smallprint

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OKAY!

Well, thank you very much to any of y’all who survived all the way to the end. I’m excited to hear y’alls thoughts and I’m looking forward to lost of feedback. Here are some questions that I had. (I may have looked at your file for some question st…[Read more]

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Woah! You’re signature quote! I love it! Do you know who said that, or is the author unknown?

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The hours passed, but there was little dread in them for Joseph. Beric slept most of the time, and when Joseph laid a hand against the boy’s forehead, he found it was still hot with fever. His own eyes burned, and he was sure Stephen was little better.

Afte…

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well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.

Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!

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12/31/24

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The next morning, Joseph was startled awake by the sound of keys jangling in the lock. He sat up quickly, jolting Amelia awake.

Beric rolled over and yawned.

At the other side of the room, David was a…

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12/30/24

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(it’s loonnnggggeee)

“Would you pass the bread?” Stephen asked.

Joseph handed it to him, and Stephen cut a slice. “Amelia, this is truly an amazing supper.”

“It sure is,” Joseph agreed.

Amelia smiled…

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Sorry, the post didn’t tag you! Just read the post above for the prompt!

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Some people…[Read more]

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12/28/24

Section 1.

(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉

if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.

NEXT SECTION

The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…

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Happy Belated Birthday! 🎂🎊🎈

Thank you!

I have finished the book. I was tearing up at the end. Charles was one of my favorites. I still haven’t given up hope that he will be saved in the next book, even though I know he won’t. That hymn was so beautiful and definitely fitting. I’ll try to get to the questions soon, but it…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint lol that raccoon

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You’re very welcome.

Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.

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I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]

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Sounds good!

I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.

Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!

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Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.

Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.

Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!

😉

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I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.

The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions

Character

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]

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I’d give you cake, but that would be a lie, and then I’d end up being sued by GLaDOS, and that is a fight I can’t win, so sorry. I hope you had a good birthday though!

Portal mention eeeeeeee

I haven’t played the games yet (I like puzzle games) but I like listening to their soundtracks. They’re so weird and synth-y.

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Will keep questions in mind 👍

Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting character development. I think in the draft two versions I understood her more.

I think she’s really fun, but I…[Read more]

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My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft

lol. That sounds like my brother.

I’m on it. Give me one sec….

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What kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want just a chill overview of what I think, or more detailed and critique-ish?