Linus Smallprint

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aha. That makes sense….
And it works. Joseph’s main struggle is dread, and so that book played more off of the dread factor. I wanted you to feel his hopelessness.

This is different, so it’s good that it came across different.

Also, I believe you were the one who mentioned Phillip’s section seeming a little out of place.…[Read more]

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I have to say, this was probably one of the most exciting sections I’ve ever read in this series.

Wow. This has always been a favorite section of mine but, i must know, why did you say that? What makes this one stand out so much?

Not Roland? I know he just got married, but that man loves hunting, and its not like he’s goi…

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“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.

“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.

“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”

“Then let’s pla…

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haha! It would be a British mystery. I may have to write that……….

Plot Armour!

Oh. You just wait.

He does not get to keep that for long.

I killed Aelic.

Sometimes, it’s nice to keep things simple. Just a few words and normalish clothing.

Honestly though, I love that image.

I’ll want a wedding dress, (…[Read more]

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 31st      
The Empire

It is growing dark. I am sitting beside Leon, who is tossing in fevered sleep. Last night we were attacked by wolves, and several of us w…

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ugh. KP is grounded for bad behavior.
🤣

Question out of curiosity: How do you decide if the journal entries you share should be from either Leon or Julian? Some authors may try to give an even number for both characters, but you seem to have some sort of method for choosing them.

huh. I haven’t really thought about it. Well, I g…[Read more]

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Awesome. 🙂 I still have a couple weeks of school left so I’ll start the topic after.

Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD

Is anyone else planning on doing it?

Yeesss, you bet I’ll be ther…[Read more]

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Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13th 
The Empire

We are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…

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With the numbers in their group increased, travel was slower. Still, they pressed on toward the mountains, keeping up a steady pace each day. Four days later they were climbing the foothills and still they continued h…

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I dunno. I like that movie a lot, but it never came to mind while I wrote this scene.

These one sentence time skips aren’t bad, I just have a habit of missing them and then getting confused. Bad habit, that.  The whole escape happened so fast and I kept missing things that I had no idea why they were suddenly in the mo…

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
February 16th
The Empire

Loosing Aelic has been the most heartbreaking thing I have experienced since Adrian’s death. Aelic was such a dear brother, and we all love…

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Whoops. 🫣😂

Good-bye, Aelic

yeah. 😭

There’s a close friend to our family who is very passionate about scripture memorization. He has memorized the entire New Testemant and has made it his goal to encourage others to memorize God’s word. He talks about how we don’t really forget anything, and sometimes, with a little push,…

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When Leon woke, the light in the shed was very dim. He could hear the sound of voices and pounding and feet hurrying back and forth outside. “I wonder what they’re doing,” he muttered. He began to wonder how the villagers…

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completely off topic but Bastille is an awesome name for a character. It sounds like a female name, but I guess it could be for a guy too.

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I don’t need no Literary License.

I think so. It’s still early in the book. You could kill them all off and switch to a different character at this point as the protagansit, but that would be really weird as you have already established Leon and Julian as the protagonists.

hmmm.

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For the reason Leon mentioned. Reflexes happening faster than recognition.

Aha. Makes sense.

From this description, first the yelling and banging, then coming down to see everyone else only just standing there, I thought there was a riot outside. So I was surprised to learn that it was only snow and that there had been no…

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New chapters on the Part 2 doc!

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The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.

When Julian arrived, he found Marti…

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