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Big Yikes!

he made it though! 😅

I don’t think you intended this, but this is a little harsh. The way he said it, it comes across as challenging unbelief. Like Leon is saying, ‘Do any of you now dare to disbelief after what happened to me?’ I think it’s the way he starts the sentence. ‘Can any of you deny…’ This might no…

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@linus-smallprint   (I know you haven’t had a chance to get to yesterday’s, but I’m impatient. Sorry.) 😂

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Night had fallen about the city, and the occupants of the palace were retiring to their rooms. Prince Dietrich had excused him…

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Oh good gravy, yes… that’s way too true. XD

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New chapter on the doc. 😉

Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳

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Over the next few days, many came to Christ due to the events in the city square. The Sabbath came, and Leon eagerly watched for Marius and the prince. They arrived, and Leon greeted Dietrich, slapping him on the back. “How are you two?…

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As of right now, I have re-done parts of The Woods of Rosen which are now integral to where the story is headed (this is because I realized they would work better for the story and characters). So, I’m thinking instead of posting the chapters of the b…[Read more]

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XD No worries. Seems like it worked pretty well!

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Another teenage boy? How many does she have and why is she introducing another one?

Dude. You are so mean. 😝

Yes, you’re right. I can’t just go change his age. Thank you!

Yes, but Wilhelm is the traditional spelling. 😁 (you still say it Vwilhelm)

Having the heir to the throne on your side is helpful. But I’m sure t…

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Oh my word!!!! BUT IT’S SO TRUE!!!!! *sobs*

🤣🤣

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The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 10th
The Empire

To Johannes, Heinrich, and the brothers at the University,

Greetings in the name of our Lord, Jesus Christ

Such wonderful news! Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haid…

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Hard to follow the rule of staying on the path when the path itself won’t cooperate.

Yep lol.

Nice!

You guys really like the slap part huh? XD

Looks good! Waiting for the next part.

Thanks!

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The next Sabbath, Hans did not return, but Julian was pleased to see Marius slip in and sit down. With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens. Marius leaned over and whispered something to his companion who nodded. Ju…

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I don’t know. It didn’t really stand out to me, but then from your notes I knew it was going to happen.

Whaley did make a strong point.

I think you could go either way.

Honestly, maybe a mix is best.

Either your original way with a little more listening, or Whaley’s way with a little more anger.

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It did seem a bit off character. I don’t know that she’d necessarily be considerate, but I think she’d be more annoyed than mad. Or if she is mad, it’d be for getting them in this mess to begin with.

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What do you all think? Is Tyn’s reaction in Chapter the 1st in line with her character? Or do you think she would take a more considerate approach like Whaley is suggesting?

Hmm. It’s a hard question. I’ll have to give it more thought–I found that her reaction didn’t quite suit her, but I can’t really pinpoint why. It might be a…[Read more]

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yeah, the girl slaves were in the house.

Okay…. maybe. That’s a big gap between the twins tho. I may change it. I have a new character in his 20s coming in.

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No problem, it just confused me and I wondered if I was misunderstanding.

Okay, that makes more sense. Lol! That’s really weird.

Yeah, I’m trying not to spoil anything, but it seems like it will still work… possibly. I’m not sure if the glitch on the page (with the mysterious text box) is the best way to go, but it will do…[Read more]

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So when Alan joins The Faithful, and suddenly his behaviour changes (such as his reasons to fight), she is disturbed by this. To her, this kind of looks like he is giving up his independent thinking to some big jerk who thinks he has a right to do whatever he wants with the world.

Ah, there we go! That makes sense. Instead of her…[Read more]

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Also, as for them majority being males, I grew up in a household of boys, and my sister came along when I was already in my teens. Sooo…. boys have always been easy for me to write because I can watch them. I find girls harder because I don’t really live with older girls.