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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
A cruelly twisted game. They wanted to brake Ardenta. They cut them off from their land for no good reason but to break their spirits. To see Joseph and the others give would be more rewarding than killing them. The people of the Empire have a lot of interesting beliefs about death and dying with honor and such, and seeing…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
wow! Long reply. A little intimidating……
Interesting. I like these ideas. I think I shall certainly use some of them! I like that gentle yet firm approach. It’s a good idea.
Huh. I think this is one of the only times I bring up Adrain….. but I may be wrong. Oh I totally agree that other religions can have…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Okay…. so here is where I hit a slight problem. Leon and Julian use a very different script which is how you tell their writing apart. However, those fonts don’t transfer. So, I’ll italicize anything Julian writes, and have anything Le…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Hello, how are you all? Nice Thursday isn’t it (well, the weathers not great here but that’s okay).
Here, I will be posting chapters for my new WIP, The Woods of Rosen. ill probably post the first chapter tomorrow once it has been thoroughly cleaned up, and please feel free to critique anything from it. If you don’t like something in it, somet…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Tagging you because you draw and may have some experience in this.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
also, if KP glitches and you don’t get all the notifs, I try to post at least once a day, so if you check I’ll most likely have posted something between 5:00 in the morning and noon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
(Sorry, things are crazy right now. Otherwise I would have posted one yesterday too)
The next morning, Leon and Julian woke early. The two sat and read their Bibles for a time. Then Julian sat down beside Leon on the edge of his bed and…
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Kefa started the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Welcome one and all! This is where I shall share about ALL of my work in progresses! I have quit a few!
Anyway, here my WIPs I have:
The Kingdom of Kaimor (fantasy/sword and sorcery)
A Cellar’s tales, WIP name (group of horror stories, that are connected)
That other WIP, still doesn’t have a name 😅 The one about the immortal girl. (Historical…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I just got way too much satisfaction out of that response.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
just joking. I just couldn’t resist.
It’s me. It’s the Elvish translation of my name.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@linus-smallprint I can see the Alan/Cloud Strife comparison actually.
Alcatraz was named after Alcatraz the First….However, when the librarians took over the world, they took these traditional names and named prisons after them. Then they went and named mountains after themselves.
ohhh makes sense.
But if all the librarians are evil….who’s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I just requested access. I’m using an alias but it’s me.
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Also, doesn’t Hilda have some… *cough cough* uhhh… LGBTQ things in it…. 😳…. or is that just dumb fan stuff?
dumb fan stuff
I just finished the first Alcatraz book and it is one of my new favorite books. It’s hilarious. I listened to the audiobook in my car and there were multiple times when Al would say…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
*Comes in guns blazing* I shall defend Eric if needs must.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I almost said Eustace but I LOVE him in The Last Battle and I don’t love Eric at the moment……
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Yeah, that’s more accurate. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Lolol. Well, Bernd isn’t a super major character… so I guess you can get his name wrong.
Leon and Julian might not necessarily take the correct option first as well. It might be interesting to see some consequences for hiding their beliefs and how they have to deal with that.
Well…… they have had twelve or so years…[Read more]
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