Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint aww cute! His paws look great too.

@linus-smallprint

I like Rasins. Good for Leon and Julian not rejecting them.

why would anyone reject raisins!!??

Hmm. They’ve been away for about ten years, so things are going to feel very different to them. I can try to add a coming home feel.

Yes, they’ve had a wild day, and it’s just getting started.

Interesting. Both the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Okay good lol

Also, Paynes cannot become Pythonos because of genetics, but I’m not sure how to incorporate that in the book quite yet…don’t worry though, I’ll make that clearer in other drafts.

@esther-c

Okay perfect! Thank you!

@linus-smallprint

I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?

@linus-smallprint

did you see the newest sections?

@linus-smallprint

Haha, That sounds like a funny strip.

Hmm, well you would be correct. Maybe. I like some long games, like Everdale, and I love Chess, but other then that I’m not much of a board game person. I like to play them once, (maybe twice) but after that it feels repetitive. *shrug*

I like card games tho. XD

The only time a…

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@linus-smallprint

Yes, but she didn’t become a Pythonos.

The Pythonos were going to take her mani for slavery and imprisonment.

Sef took her place as a slave.

@linus-smallprint

Oh that’s okay!!!

Sef turns herself into the Pythonos

Wait, hold up…

Sef doesn’t turn into the Pythonos…she is enslaved by the Pythonos. I thought I made that clearer but if not can you give me suggestions to help with that? I don’t want to confuse anyone XD

@jonas @theducktator @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @anyone-else

I haven’t heard from you guys in a while and I was just making sure you were still up for reading through my draft? It’s okay if you’re not, just please let me know…I don’t want to annoy anyone with tags XDXD

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION! 2

It was after sunset, and Julian and Leon were walking alone in the dim light. “So, how should we go about this?” Julian asked.

“I say the same as we did when on the run in Ardenta. We’ll try to get a place to sleep with a family, shar…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!

(In case anyone hasn’t noticed, I’m starting out small because this is the beginning after all. I think the sections will get bigger soon, and I’ll also maybe post some more today.)

Julian sat down on a rock by the path and drew in several dee…

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@ellette-giselle

Okay, thank you. My dad (who is also a writer) has very similar advice, and says that no matter how bad the writing may be, it’s best to get your thoughts and ideas down and then edit.

@whalekeeper

Each scene has one important decision. This is a complete set up for an inciting incident, caused by Joe’s fatal flaw. He is flo…

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@savannah_grace2009

As long as you love it and it contains a piece of your heart, that’s all that matters. <3

I’m not sure how to feel about this. I feel more as if I’m trying to put my heart into it, and I haven’t found the way to express it in writing format. But thanks for the encouragement. 😁

@linus-smallprint

If this were the case, then w…

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@the_lost-journal

“If you combine a wolf and the letter “Z” you get the number 12″

What? How does that happen?

@linus-smallprint

I love your new profile picture!!! Did you draw that?

@linus-smallprint

I say go for it! The memory loss thing is good, and the fact that he tries to join the Kunulfs. It separates it from WF. Plus, Andrew Peterson pulled a Beauty and the Beast to begin with. There’s not a romance, but trust me, there are plenty of similarities. And beauty and the beast pulled from the Bible. (see Daniel) so…. I…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I thought is was the same color as your pfp with the girl and the bookshelf. So a lighter medium brown.

Yes, a new culture.

@linus-smallprint

Gak! Everyone is driving me nuts with all this pfp and name changing. I don’t know who anyone is anymore! *sob*

lololololol.

(did you draw that?)

Oh, sounds like something my dad…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Agh… Having read this, I am completely divided. And I mean seriously divided, which doesn’t happen to me often when giving an opinion.

If Eric pulled a Kalmar, I honestly think the comparisons to Wingfeather wouldn’t stop. There are already similarities in lore, and while there are differences, Featherheads are probably g…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I guessed you like wolves!

ah, I see! What game?

@linus-smallprint

You’re very welcome!

@linus-smallprint

Book 3 time!

*throws confetti everywhere*

So it’s Leon and Julian then. (Unless you suddenly decide you want to switch to Quin for the next chapter.)

Nope. It’s Leon and Julian. Two of my favorite characters I’ve ever written.

War? War. Boat! Wolves! Snow. Orphans…

No orphans. Well, I mean I’m sure there are orphans som…[Read more]