Linus Smallprint

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Ah yes, now I get it.

People can’t just cheery pick verses.

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*blink*

Now I’m just confused.

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I’ve encountered Karl’s in my day. Guys who can quote scripture up and down, but live in complete lies, yet they try to make it look like you’re the enemy.

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Yes, that was the Stiens

Hmm, interesting that you should say that………….  I agree that the villain on the inside is a fun twist. I like this too.

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(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)

Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…

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I’ll start a post somewhere on CEW for KPers. I’d like to know who wants to join!

Additionally we should tag some more people so they are aware of this. I can explain anything people need to know.

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Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..

The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.

“Ho…

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Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
Naming a character is not a simple thing. 😂

@linus-smallprint yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.

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True, bit it sort of fit him. Now I’m not sure which name to use……

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Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

Okay fine, I’ll see what I can do….

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They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.

And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.

Ah yes, “I”

 

Does that make sense?

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

I was confused through these paragraphs.…

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th      
The Empire

We’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…

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It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

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Hmm. It just seemed odd. I mean, Rolf is clearly needing a break. Roland is married…….

Yeah, we’ll run into a couple friends again.

Plus, I did want to focus on Leon and Julian a bit more. I feel like they are starting to drift a little bit. With Leon struggling physically, and Julian having trouble with what’s…[Read more]

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Yes, it is.

Really?! That’s so cool!

This is the version of that psalm set to music that I always loved.

We also have another Psalm 13 hymn in our church too. I like this version best though. It just really gets the feel right.

So they are headed back now. I guess…

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“They’re back!” yelled a child’s voice.

Leon scrambled to his feet and ran for the entrance to the cave. Roland, Liesl and several others followed. They stepped out into the evening light just in time to see the hunt…

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New chapters!

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aha. That makes sense….
And it works. Joseph’s main struggle is dread, and so that book played more off of the dread factor. I wanted you to feel his hopelessness.

This is different, so it’s good that it came across different.

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