Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

I thought so.

A lot happened in that last section that I was hoping on feedback for, so it was surprising when you didn’t say anything. XD

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, okay. Well that’s odd.

Okay, so you have reached the point where Roland is injured.

No thoughts on the assassination attempt?

idk what I ended up saying.

Okay…. let me go look.

Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad the characters are becoming more alive! Hybridlore would disagree with you on not having all of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

OH MY GOODNESS!!!

That’s amazing!!! That’s so cool!!!! Wow! I LOVE how you draw scenes like that!

YOU MUST keep that in the book if you publish with illustrations.

@liberty

Okay…. I could wait I day.

@keilah-h

Glad you found that interesting!!

@linus-smallprint

Have you read the latest section I posted yesterday? I couldn’t tell from the feedback how far you still were. (trying to figure out how long I need to pause.)

@linus-smallprint wow that’s good! I like the shading.

@linus-smallprint I’d join if you did that!

@linus-smallprint

Yes, I got it.

Not sure if you got my reply….

@linus-smallprint

I love it sooo much!!! They’re so cute!

Tagging some people to make them aware of this area on KP!

@mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @rae @godlyfantasy12 @theshadow @princesachronicle22

Y’all are also free to answer last week’s question if you like.

@theshadow

It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD

@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢

Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint    @Liberty    @Hybridlore     @Koshka    @elishavet-pidyon     @Keilah-h

Just a heads up to y’all, if KP is acting up and you don’t get tagged, I normally post a section every morning, (save Sunday) baring assassination, the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name), or an opportunity…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint    @Liberty    @Hybridlore     @Koshka    @Elishavet-Eloy    @Keilah-h

Lets try this again

NEXT SECTION!!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
April 30th
The Empire

Leon was not arrested as we had feared, thank God. The Governor only wanted to speak with him, and the results have been unbelievable. The…

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@linus-smallprint   @koshka     @keilah-h      @elishavet-pidyon    @liberty

I plan on posting another section today as usual, but since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore, I’m wondering if Y’all need me to wait a day or two? What do y’all think? I don’t want to completely lose ya.

@linus-smallprint

@koshka

@keilah-h

@elishavet-pidyon

@liberty

Re-tagging Y’all. (sorry if you already got a notification) KP was acting glitchy for me this morning, and hybridlore told me the notification didn’t end up getting to her, so I thought I’d be safe.

IF YOU DIDN’T SEE IT THERE IS A NEW SECTION.

There was also a new section…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal  @raxforge  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h

I thought of you peoples in particular when my dad sent this to me.

@linus-smallprint

I’ll tag the art people. Don’t feel obligated to reply.

@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @i-know-im-forgetting-someone-please-help

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

 

“Oh, it is good to be back!” Rolf exclaimed as he reclined with the others about the fire.

“How is your village?” Johannes asked as he leaned forward to stoke the blaze.

“It is doing well. The winter was a hard one and took some of…

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