Linus Smallprint

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The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
         October 7th
         The Empire

As you will see by yesterday’s entries, I have returned to the Empire. It took all of yesterday to chronicle everything that happened to Ro…

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Days passed, and slowly, Leon regained some of the strength he had lost. On the second week, he was told he could work if he wanted to, and he did so with a will. It was wonderful to be with Rolf again, and the work was not draining a…

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Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!

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😭😢

It’s okay…. I understand.

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Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
The Empire<…

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New chapter, please tear into this.

Chapter 4

Dylan stopped abruptly, “Where’s the path?”
“What do you mean ‘where’s the path’?” Olivia shoved past Elina and Jack, gazing out ahead. A seemingly endless sea of trees met her.

“Oh, great, nic…[Read more]

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So, in answer to all the questions:

the laptop did an un-authorized update. So while I hit save on all my documents, I still had them minimized instead of fully closed. Normally it tells me about the update and offers a time. I then shut everything fully down, make sure it’s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Umm… Perehapes he was a slave, or at least treated like one, earlier in his life, along with his brothers and cousins. They escaped, and tired to help other slaves.

🤨

I wrote like two paragraphs of his backstory.

This is Omar we’re talking about.

Have you read the section where he introduces himself to Leon??

Okay l…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Those are great ideas, thank you so much!! This is spurring a lot of ideas now, thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Understandable. Contemporary writing is kind of like writing set in the present or close to it, and are mainly based in reality.

@esther-c

Thank you for the suggestions, I’ll check them out! Okay, compelling characters seem…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great, thank you!

@linus-smallprint great job! I gave you some edits and suggestions.

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my loyal subjects, I beg pardon.

Tragedy has struck.

The dragon laptop ate LOS for breakfast! 😱

I was able to recover most of it, but alas I must be away to other duties.

No new sections until Monday. 😭

🐲

@linus-smallprint

Oh my word.

😂

@linus-smallprint

You know what, I was thinking that while I was editing yesterday morning!! 😂

When I hear this name, I think of an old, kindly grandfather.

Um…… you’re off by like 40 years.

I would peg this guy in his late 30s. Maybe early 40s.

It wasn’t too long ago that he was still physically fighting the slave trade, and he was a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

No soup…….?

*paces around room. Tries to understand why that’s funny. Knows that once it is explained I will remember why it was funny*

@linus-smallprint

Lucky. I wish we got more snow. It’s been in the 70s today. Beautiful, but I want to go sledding.

@linus-smallprint

Up here in Canada, we’ve gotten snow as late as May.

It’s 18 degrees Celcius outside and the warmest thing I wore today was a sweatshirt.

*chuckles because I get to say I’m Canadian whilst living in a Southern area of Canada*

@linus-smallprint I requested access just so you know in case you don’t recognize my email. Although it’s kinda obvious seeing as I’m “Stephie” here

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I’m a bit missy with the point of view in there,

Messy…. I believe.

Yes. I feel like correcting people’s grammar today.

Maybe I’ve been writing too many Nazi POVs.