Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle What an ending!!! I hope we’re getting the next book soon.

Although, one question. Was the Christian prince the only one? Who’s gonna inherit the throne when the Emperor dies now? (Don’t tell me the priests have tried to make it so one of them will get it.)

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Never assume anyone is dead until you have seen the…

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Common sence. Got it.

Thank you.

No girls fighting with broadswords as big as they are.

No boys wresting free of a group of well trained, armed men.

Short for Nicodemus. That’s all I will explain.

ahhh…. I think I see where you’re going.

Never assume anyone is dead until you have seen the body.” – A likey butch…

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No worries! I get it. I just wondered.

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(Another thought, the priests think Leon is dead from what I know. I don’t know if they ever learned that the arrow did not hit him. But this person wrote the letter directly to Leon.)

Ohh, good point!

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Oh, one other thing. @hybridlore says it seems unclear that the prince is dead. I don;t know if you saw our conversation, but if you did, what are your thoughts?

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Sure, he can try. He’s been trying for the last few minutes. It’s not going to do much good. He’s a sixteen-year-old kid against several temple guards.

They’re going to win.

On a side note, I wonder what the Priest’s motivations are (other than hatred of God). Seems like control over the people may be a big one, possibly w…

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Big Yikes!

he made it though! 😅

I don’t think you intended this, but this is a little harsh. The way he said it, it comes across as challenging unbelief. Like Leon is saying, ‘Do any of you now dare to disbelief after what happened to me?’ I think it’s the way he starts the sentence. ‘Can any of you deny…’ This might no…

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@linus-smallprint   (I know you haven’t had a chance to get to yesterday’s, but I’m impatient. Sorry.) 😂

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Night had fallen about the city, and the occupants of the palace were retiring to their rooms. Prince Dietrich had excused him…

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Oh good gravy, yes… that’s way too true. XD

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New chapter on the doc. 😉

Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳

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Over the next few days, many came to Christ due to the events in the city square. The Sabbath came, and Leon eagerly watched for Marius and the prince. They arrived, and Leon greeted Dietrich, slapping him on the back. “How are you two?…

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As of right now, I have re-done parts of The Woods of Rosen which are now integral to where the story is headed (this is because I realized they would work better for the story and characters). So, I’m thinking instead of posting the chapters of the b…[Read more]

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XD No worries. Seems like it worked pretty well!

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Another teenage boy? How many does she have and why is she introducing another one?

Dude. You are so mean. 😝

Yes, you’re right. I can’t just go change his age. Thank you!

Yes, but Wilhelm is the traditional spelling. 😁 (you still say it Vwilhelm)

Having the heir to the throne on your side is helpful. But I’m sure t…

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Oh my word!!!! BUT IT’S SO TRUE!!!!! *sobs*

🤣🤣

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The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 10th
The Empire

To Johannes, Heinrich, and the brothers at the University,

Greetings in the name of our Lord, Jesus Christ

Such wonderful news! Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haid…

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Hard to follow the rule of staying on the path when the path itself won’t cooperate.

Yep lol.

Nice!

You guys really like the slap part huh? XD

Looks good! Waiting for the next part.

Thanks!

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The next Sabbath, Hans did not return, but Julian was pleased to see Marius slip in and sit down. With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens. Marius leaned over and whispered something to his companion who nodded. Ju…

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I don’t know. It didn’t really stand out to me, but then from your notes I knew it was going to happen.

Whaley did make a strong point.

I think you could go either way.

Honestly, maybe a mix is best.

Either your original way with a little more listening, or Whaley’s way with a little more anger.

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It did seem a bit off character. I don’t know that she’d necessarily be considerate, but I think she’d be more annoyed than mad. Or if she is mad, it’d be for getting them in this mess to begin with.