Linus Smallprint

I finished my 350 words. They’re on paper, but here’s a snippet:

Being chained to a wall and forced to learn history was possibly the most miserable start to a morning ever. Burnt toast did not help either. Jorin sighed. Malzor was a terrible cook, or maybe he just didn’t care whether Jorin was well fed or not. He could almost taste his fathers’s…

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@liberty

So, what are you concluding now?

Good question lol. As of late. I’ve become very overly obsessive over whether something is right or wrong, and this isn’t the only subject I’ve been mulling over lately. I’m still not sure, because I don’t want to end up doing what’s wrong, but I also can’t confirm that Christmas is 100% bad either.

What…

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@linus-smallprint

It’s good. I like it.

I feel like Alan should have been a bit more remorseful in the end. It felt more like he tried to snitch a cookie and got caught more then he was using black magic. idk. I would have liked a repentance prayer, maybe a few tears, idk. It just didn’t feel real to me. *shrug* that might just be…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Um, not at all their characters, but that’s funny itr makes you think of them.

Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)

@hybridlore

I wonder if that’s really going to be a problem when you are reading the book straight through, because William is introduced literally only two scenes…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

*adds you to my revenge list*

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Hello everyone again! I am going to be taking another “break” from KP! But it isn’t going to be exactly the same. I am trying to unplug for winter break and I will take out my computer to…[Read more]

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STEPHEN

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DAVID

@elishavet-pidyon

Is that a threat?

I love threats!!!!

Yes, she is a lot of fun.

@linus-smallprint

Much better

@linus-smallprint

*comes back from getting buckets to use for a snow castle*

Hmmm… choices, choices….

TNPT 🙂

@linus-smallprint

This was the Bible study mentioned in the section right before.

Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?

No, no, Will was the fellow Joseph was talking to in the inn who was also working to provide a home for his fiance.

Is that what William was supposed to say?

No. I tried to different r…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Because he totally is on my side in this because he is a person who is on my side because he is on my side because he likes my side because he’s totally on my side.

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NEXT SECTION

“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.

“Rose is ill,” William said.

Joseph glanced at the empty chair beside the young man and gave him an encouraging smile.…

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@linus-smallprint

No problem. I have another collage friend who was attacked by a final too.

(They must be like Alcatraz’s Kittens.)

But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!

If you were writing something more witty, that would totally work.

Yes, but I’m not a witty writer. That’s your field.

@linus-smallprint

Yay! I had just given up on you and was preparing the next section to post.

Now is this the Andrew that was in the first draft? (Also, I think you meant to say Sabina replied)

Yes it is! I don’t care if the reader never knows that, but I just had to make the little link because I know Andrew’s story even though it never comes…[Read more]

Well, not only have I written my last five snowballs, I wrote about 2 000 words.

*chuckles*

And I killed off one of my beloved characters.

*cries heart out*

Anyways, now I have 10 snowballs.

I also really want another chapter from Linus.

@linus-smallprint x10

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This is how my story on this forum goes.

It is a very sad beginning.  &#…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Wheel of Time is on my to read list. My characters are separated into groups/by themselves at the moment, but they are going to meet up at some point in the not so distant future. I think there are two together, and the other four are alone somewhere, but two of them will meet up shortly.

How does character B’s plot impact c…

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here you go!!

I can’t wait to hear feedback on who he is and what sort of character he’ll turn out to be!!!

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Anyone want to see the Aesthetic of a character we haven’t met yet? Ya’ll are free to guess who it might be, but I’m not promising answers.