Linus Smallprint

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Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
Naming a character is not a simple thing. 😂

@linus-smallprint yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.

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True, bit it sort of fit him. Now I’m not sure which name to use……

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Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

Okay fine, I’ll see what I can do….

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They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.

And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.

Ah yes, “I”

 

Does that make sense?

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

I was confused through these paragraphs.…

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th      
The Empire

We’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…

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It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

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Hmm. It just seemed odd. I mean, Rolf is clearly needing a break. Roland is married…….

Yeah, we’ll run into a couple friends again.

Plus, I did want to focus on Leon and Julian a bit more. I feel like they are starting to drift a little bit. With Leon struggling physically, and Julian having trouble with what’s…[Read more]

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Yes, it is.

Really?! That’s so cool!

This is the version of that psalm set to music that I always loved.

We also have another Psalm 13 hymn in our church too. I like this version best though. It just really gets the feel right.

So they are headed back now. I guess…

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“They’re back!” yelled a child’s voice.

Leon scrambled to his feet and ran for the entrance to the cave. Roland, Liesl and several others followed. They stepped out into the evening light just in time to see the hunt…

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New chapters!

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aha. That makes sense….
And it works. Joseph’s main struggle is dread, and so that book played more off of the dread factor. I wanted you to feel his hopelessness.

This is different, so it’s good that it came across different.

Also, I believe you were the one who mentioned Phillip’s section seeming a little out of place.…[Read more]

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I have to say, this was probably one of the most exciting sections I’ve ever read in this series.

Wow. This has always been a favorite section of mine but, i must know, why did you say that? What makes this one stand out so much?

Not Roland? I know he just got married, but that man loves hunting, and its not like he’s goi…

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“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.

“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.

“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”

“Then let’s pla…

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haha! It would be a British mystery. I may have to write that……….

Plot Armour!

Oh. You just wait.

He does not get to keep that for long.

I killed Aelic.

Sometimes, it’s nice to keep things simple. Just a few words and normalish clothing.

Honestly though, I love that image.

I’ll want a wedding dress, (…[Read more]

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 31st      
The Empire

It is growing dark. I am sitting beside Leon, who is tossing in fevered sleep. Last night we were attacked by wolves, and several of us w…

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ugh. KP is grounded for bad behavior.
🤣

Question out of curiosity: How do you decide if the journal entries you share should be from either Leon or Julian? Some authors may try to give an even number for both characters, but you seem to have some sort of method for choosing them.

huh. I haven’t really thought about it. Well, I g…[Read more]

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Awesome. 🙂 I still have a couple weeks of school left so I’ll start the topic after.

Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD

Is anyone else planning on doing it?

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Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13th 
The Empire

We are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…

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