Linus Smallprint

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It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…

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Okay, here’s a question for y’all.

So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]

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I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.

mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.

Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…

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New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.

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The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…

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@linus-smallprint i mean like as long as you’re clarifying that superstitions are wrong, then it’s not bad to include it as an obstacle to the characters..

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

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Ah yes, now I get it.

People can’t just cheery pick verses.

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*blink*

Now I’m just confused.

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I’ve encountered Karl’s in my day. Guys who can quote scripture up and down, but live in complete lies, yet they try to make it look like you’re the enemy.

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Yes, that was the Stiens

Hmm, interesting that you should say that………….  I agree that the villain on the inside is a fun twist. I like this too.

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(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)

Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…

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I’ll start a post somewhere on CEW for KPers. I’d like to know who wants to join!

Additionally we should tag some more people so they are aware of this. I can explain anything people need to know.

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Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..

The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.

“Ho…

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Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
Naming a character is not a simple thing. 😂

@linus-smallprint yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.

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True, bit it sort of fit him. Now I’m not sure which name to use……

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Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

Okay fine, I’ll see what I can do….

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They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.

And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.

Ah yes, “I”

 

Does that make sense?

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

I was confused through these paragraphs.…

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th      
The Empire

We’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…

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