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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Looks like this section is a hit!
I mostly use ESV, but sometimes I’ll use another version if I find it translates the Hebrew/Greek better for the particular verse/passage.
I’m glad you like that scene. It’s one of my fav.
Spring Fever is a real thing. Especially among the teenage guys at our church.
lol.
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whaley replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ah, Ninjago. #GiveColeAFocusSeason
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator @esther-c and @liberty
Okay, So highscribe came up with an amazing idea! You all can add one of your characters if you’d like! (If you wouldn’t mind having no control over them) Here are the requirements:
They…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock?
By the way, do you have any guesses for why Alan was able to defeat his attackers so easily while Stripe was easily beaten?
Two.
One, capturing Alan’s father is a decoy because for some reason the king wants Alan to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
NEXT SECTION
Stephen and David continued to grow, and Joseph found himself looking up to them in many ways. Mr. Caddick was always a source of wisdom, and Joseph found himself coming to him often. It seemed so strange to Joseph that they all looked up to him,…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
btw, thanks for the “guy-talk” scene. 😉
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Dang, I forgot to invite you! 😓 Sorry! If you are interested make sure to read the other stuff sent by me! >:3
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator and @liberty
Btw guys, feel free to inform anyone I haven’t yet! And
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Lenny replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator and @liberty
HAPPY ST. NICHOLAS DAY!!!!!!
(Es ist ein Deutscher Feiertag!)
If you don’t know what I said. Then you will NEVER know mwahahaha!
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Oh shoot, I should prob talk about the vandals. Huh.
SO each team gets to start out with $50,000 dollars! But each time they lose a teammate they also lose $1,000 dollars which goes to the winning…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals and @liberty
I am glad you asked! Basically you the readers get t0 vote first the game (from three options. that voting will be like this)
(A) Challenge 1# (B) Challenge 2# (C) Challenge 3# (You will know what the…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
To say I didn’t know the minute Alan’s father made the plan would be lying.
I knew he was going to get caught.
I really liked this chapter! I like it a whole lot!
Poor Stripe, I feel bad for him. Perfume is awful!! Especially ON YOUR NOSE!
Okay, the similarities thing
The only thing that stood out to me as being…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
So fun to work with!
I know! Sabina is gonna get herself killed.
But, she’s like that. I mean, remember how spunky she was when she was being a total snark to Aaron and Turin. She hasn’t lost all of that.
still, it scares me when she does stuff like that!
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator and @liberty
WELCOME, WELCOME ONE AND ALL! Today is the grand release of my funnest project yet! AN INTERACTIVE game show! (well I think they are like a game show…) But what will happen is that there will be  5…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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I know I said I wasn’t officially back yet, BUT NOW I AM! I hope you guys had a nice week! And I am happy to announce that I will never EVER take a break from KP again! (Although my life was ten times…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One started the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
In my current WIP, I have 6 MCs right now, but I want to add another one or two. In another one, I have 11, though that one may change. Is this too many? When does the amount of main characters become too many to keep track of?
@whalekeeper @rae @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @raxforge @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @ellette-giselle…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 month, 2 weeks ago
This is a pretty specific question, I’ll admit. 😅 Any other history nerds? @koshka @esther-c @liberty @mineralizedwritings @otherworldlyhistorian @jonas @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @linus-smallprint @rae
Sorry for the tags if you’re not interested, guys.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
Alright, I believe now we are back on track.
I’ll put a little from the previous section in here. We are now back to just after Joseph’s letter to Sabina.
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Sometimes I feel so inadequate teaching the people, especially when I train up Mr. Caddick, Da…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh good. I saw this and I was like, “Oh no, it’s a long response. This might be bad.”
Didn’t your mother teach you not to slam doors around?
Didn’t you ever accidentally do it when you were in a rush and weren’t thinking? lol.
Someone’s going to need to snap him out of it eventually, but for now, this is good.
Good. Goo…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Anyone want to see one of my MCs for The Crimson Rose?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
Okay Linus, I put that part in that you suggested. I plan on having it just after Stephen and David bring their friends, and I left part of that in this section so you can get the flow. I hope this fixes the problem you mentioned.
Thoughts Anyone?
&n…[Read more]
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