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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
How did I know y’all were going to say this.
What did I tell you, Hybridlore? I said, I’m trying to work on the next section, but Linus is going to make me redo it and add some fillers.
grrrr.
Okay. Hmmm.
I’ll cut that scene you both agree on.
I’ll try to fill in some Joseph and Amelia stuff.
How much…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.
I think it’s his mother.
Maybe.
Also, I think you’re missing something?
He remembered the day General Pownce had given it to him. On that day, the lyen general had
Maybe “had said”
Oh shoot.
Linus!!!! WHY! I am furious with you right now. Just…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
You sure did.It wasn’t a hard one tho.
Hmmm. I see what you mean.
I might switch that.
We’ll see what @linus-smallprint says.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Hah! @linus-smallprint and I called it!! 😆
So, good section. The end… I know you said there are going to be parts of the books where you include longer scripture passages. That’s fine, but this scene kind of feels almost exactly like Aaron’s did, when he was studying the Bible about a husband and wife. I think it’s too similar…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
ok, @raxforge and @linus-smallprint
Are you two participating? If not then that is perfectly fine :D. I will stop tagging you if that is so!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
NEXT SECTION!
Time continued to pass, and the days grew warmer and longer. Joseph thrived as he spent his days working hard in the fields and the evening studying with his brothers in Christ, or fellowshipping with the Caddick family. It was during this time t…
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator @esther-c and @liberty
Btw, voting ends on December 14th. At exactly 11:59 Pm EST.
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @loopylin@theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator @esther-c and @liberty
IT IS HERE! Welcome are contestants! (Don’t worry there are no main characters. We just start with the sisters.) (Also sorry if this is a little messy, we promise that the actual chapters will be shorter and less messy.…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow@arcticanimals @theducktator @esther-c and @liberty
Okay, deadline is up! Thanks for submitting again to Liberty, Rae and Shadow! We will release the characters soon!
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator @esther-c and @liberty
Okay everyone, deadline is today! At 3:30 pm EST! Thanks to liberty, rae and shadow who all submitted a character! If anyone else is interested in doing so, please message me asap! Thank you!
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Another thing liberty, what is buddy’s negative character traits? I get to hear his good ones, but what is he bad at? What skills shape his character for the worse? What makes him frustrated and causes him anger? And with Sebastien, I heard a little about his flaws, but I need more to work with! Thank you so much for participating…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator @esther-c and @liberty
Attention everyone who is interested! (If anyone is not then let me know and I will stop tagging them!)
We are soon going to release the characters personalities and all that, but if you…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Crystalized was pretty bad, but I don’t think Dragons Rising is very good, either. I could rant about it, but I’m not going to because nobody wants that :p
I’ll just say the thing that bothers me the most about it is the way they’re trampling over all the lore they’ve already established. The stuff they’re introducing just…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Wondering what he was to do?
Typo, thanks
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
And it’s pretty awful that there even is a middle finger emoji. Like, that’s disgusting and sad.
I 100% agree!
I’m already not really keeping up with the fantasy RP
Oh, do people think this is an RP? I should make that clear.
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @raxforge @keilah-h @rae@whalekeeper @loopylin [Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @highscribeofaetherium
I haven’t actually watched either of these seasons all the way through. I know they are considered some of the best of Ninjago, and from what I know of them, Lloyd is pushed through some very interesting character development, but I don’t like the Oni and the Garmadon resurrection. (One problem I wish Nin…
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
There are a lot of teens/adults who still follow the show from their childhood.
Yeah, that’s pretty much why I still watch it. Nostalgia, plus to cringe at the recent seasons :p
But maybe we should take this conversation elsewhere before Ducktator kicks us off.
Lol perhaps.
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whaley replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint
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whaley replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
This is true. I feel that Master of the Mountain had very random focus episodes, so Cole didn’t get as much story besides leading the quest. But I loved his mother’s lore.
Hot take (actually this is more of an unknown take): Sons of Garmadon and Hunted were great seasons for Cole specifically.
Oh boy,…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
I didn’t even realize other teenagers/adults even liked that show 😂
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