Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Ugh, Alan actually did it. I was hoping he’d come to his senses. The ending of that chapter is the kind that always makes me and my siblings chant “read another chapter!” when my dad does read alouds. Anyway, I think the descriptions of magic were fine. It’s fantasy, and you made it all up.

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Amelia

(I hope to have Stephen and David soon)

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Older Joseph

@linus-smallprint

Saw a movie with this in recently and it was painful.

Don’t get me started.

I have some of the boards done. Not all of them tho.

@linus-smallprint

sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.

CP == Christian Perspective?

haha! That’s a good one to watch movies with always. No, Cle…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

Also the part about the writer changing them didn’t make sense to me. Why not just not write…[Read more]

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Anybody want to see some Character Aesthetics?!?!?

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SEVENTH TIME IT DELETED MY POST. GRRRR

You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind.

Okay, I got through about twenty seconds of the first song.

FF!!!! I love Final Fantasy soundtrack! XV is my…[Read more]

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beast.

Fine. I’ll write. I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*

@liberty    (because I’m nice and you like my story. lol)

Josef looked down. “It’s complicated. I didn’t choose this. I’m just… trying to survive like everyone else.

Franz shook his head bitterly. “Survive? By enforcing fear?”

Josef dropped his voic…

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@linus-smallprint

Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.

Hmm. I wounder how true this will turn out to be.

Haha,

Poor Joseph. I completely understand his reaction to this.

I know poor…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!

“Joseph, what if I displease you?”

Joseph and Amelia were sitting on the steps in what had become their normal place for talking. They were watching as David and Stephen played ball with the younger boys. Joseph had just finished playin…

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I for one thought the spell images were kind of cool… I think they gave a glimpse into how wonderful spell-casting feels like for a wizard. You get this sense of attempting majesty, if that makes sense, and I think that aligns with Alan’s character. Also the fact that all the images had something to do with animals was rea…[Read more]

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Again, the sort of topic that makes me uncomfortable. I think you handle it fine, and don’t say anything more than needed. I just wonder if it is necessary.

That makes you uncomfortable? Just saying a guy wants to give the girl he loves a hug?

I found this greatly funny. Sorry. I probably shouldn’t.

So I think I’m going to k…[Read more]

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And I’m gonna be the person Keilah referred to……..

The spells. Why do we need to know the images? I mean, spell casting is directly linked to demonic powers. Casting spells is a real thing, (the Bible talks about it) and it’s always linked to demons. It’s not something to be taken lightly or played with. I don’t think…[Read more]

I’ve done 200 of my 400 words. I’m gonna go ahead and throw half my snowballs.

Let’s see, @grcr 💨⚪ @whalekeeper 💨⚪ @raxforge 💨⚪ @hybridlore 💨⚪ @esther-c 💨⚪ @linus-smallprint 💨⚪ @koshka 💨⚪ @theshadow 💨⚪

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Oh why! Must it be a hand or foot? And why talons! Can’t you just restrict the movement! This is horrible. If he and Martha do get married, how is he supposed to hug her without slicing her back?!?!?

*feels slightly offended for the 90% of my characters that have talons*

I’M KIDDING I’M KIDDING

I mean, I have a c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Hmm, this was interesting.

How do Alan’s friends feel about this?

Does he realize how guilty he’ll be when he wakes up? I mean, he just dedicated his life to God and swore off magic a few chapters ago.

I’m not sure how I feel about the spells being as descriptive as they are. I had no problem with it, personally, although it…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!

The weeks passed, and Joseph lived through them in a blur of joy and excitement. He and Amelia had many wonderful conversations with her parents, and even some between just the two of them. They worked together when they could and enjoyed obs…

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@linus-smallprint

Yeah, you could scar his face, or you could have some sort of wicked lightning scar that goes up his back and twists around one or both of his shoulders. Maybe the pain from those scars flares up now and then. *shrug* Plus, that could be a pretty terrible scene when Alan is getting the scars. There’s a tone of potential in it.