Linus Smallprint

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

 

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

 

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

 

 

QUESTIONS!

 

 

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I will. It’ll be a bit odd this time because I feel like I already asked most of them on LOS. I should have a few though.

@linus-smallprint

 

Yay!!! Linus saves the day. Why didn’t I think of that with Flavia? 🤦🏼‍♀️

 

Good. Good. I’m glad the time skip works.

 

The person was an acolyte of the priests who saw what happened.

 

Thank you for sharing your series with us! If I remember correctly, it was just about a year ago that you started posting the first book…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Okay, I’m sorry, that was a bit of a mess. I tried to send a Word document with the two new chapters in it because Ellette can’t do Google anymore. There are two (?) links I sent. The right one is the second one, without a message.

Hopefully this works.

@theducktator

Nice.

@ducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint

New chapters are out. I wrote this week, so I feel like I have enough room to give you guys two.

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.

Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.

Or does that not work.

 

I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…

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Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!

NEXT SECTION!

 

    Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…

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Oh well! here are some tags cause I must tell everyone! ^

@keilah-h

@rae

@ellette-giselle

@theducktator

@grcr

@linus-smallprint

@hybridlore

@raxforge

@whalekeeper

@loopylin

@arcticanimals

@esther-c

@jonas and

@liberty

@stephie

@savannah_grace2009

@highscribeofaetherium

@koshka

@power

@freed_and_redeemed and

@thearcaneaxiom !!!!!!!!

@linus-smallprint

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]

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Ugh! I posted two hours ago, but KP ate it!

 

NEXT SECTION!

Extra long to make up for yesterday.

 

 It was several hours later that the sound of steps echoed in the hall outside. Julian and Leon stood as the door opened.

The guar…

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My family went to a museum full of fossils today, which sparked a discussion…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

no section today.

Super busy.

Sorry!

@linus-smallprint

I know this is a meme…. but this is going to be the canon way to spell potato in Kingdom of Kaimor…

XD JK

@linus-smallprint

Yes. But not because of you. It’s because of our weird language where noses run and feet smell and the inconsistent way we spell things.

bruh

@linus-smallprint

Yeah…..

 

Ah thanks.

 

Hmm, interesting. I guess we’ll have to see.

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NEXT SECTION!!!

 

Leon blew on his hands and rubbed them together. He stood up and went to his pack. Digging through it, he found his scarf. It was worn, and there were a few tears along the edge. He held it in both hands and though…

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@linus-smallprint

 

Haha!!!!

 

LOVE IT!

🤣

@linus-smallprint is it bad that I can perfectly read that as “potato” now that I know the context?? lol

@linus-smallprint

*blink* they have those?

BUT WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME BEFORE!!!!! *SOBS*

 

I guess I never stopped to think there might be such simple things on line. I mostly just use it when I have something super crazy complicated.

 

You know what would be funny? If you had Leon make the same mistake, forgetting that Julian wasn’t with h…

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