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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay, but you clearly said he did have a temper earlier, and @shadow said she liked it.
He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets f…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay…I’m so sorry…I’m not the best at critiqueing 😣😭😭😭😭
Actually I’m horrible at it but oh wellOK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???
Well…you should be able to tell a character’s age based on how they act, without the author saying that. Since both…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint
ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Howdy Light! I can’t remember if we’ve met, but welcome back!!
I’m excited to see some of your stuff, so tag me if you post anything!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh my goodness YOU GUYS!!!
OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???
I would suggest setting this story on Earth. You can still keep the country names, it can just be an alternate reality of Earth where there used to be countries with those names. Your world and ours are…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
We should resurrect this thing.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@anyone
So, I was going through my school stuff from last year, and found this in my brain book. Math is boring, okay?
I glared at the problem in front of me, wondering when the agony would end, wanting to scream, but knowing that it would only bring more pain. The clock read 11:53, only seven minutes to go. Seven minutes, but it felt like…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Dystopian Worldbuilding in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@everyone
I promise I didn’t ghost this topic. I’ve just been too tired and brain dead for worldbuilding. (It’s my fault. I was up past two reading again.) I’ll probably respond tomorrow or the day after. 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
Here’s Sef’s playlist
h ttps://open.spotify.com/playlist/6jEIFMjsHRjdyd0I6YYNZV?si=0a7c886240f64036
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
Guys…
I just made a playlist for Lilitu…
Apparently Lilitu loves rock songs…
WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!
h ttps://open.spotify.com/playlist/2lQ1Ty8ZiLQv4SK7YCtfDe?si=e606c161acbb4dbe
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
I just watched an Abbie Emmons video about how to develop characters..and she said to listen to music they’d listen to…
I’m laughing right now because I realized that Lilitu loves rock music XDXD he’s like a quiet kid that you’d never expect to love rock but his favorite band is Skillet 🤣🤣🤣 KP better prepare for me spamming the character…[Read more]
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HighScribe posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
A polka dot shirt is a striped shirt, but instead of running vertically or horizontally, they run in the third dimension.
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Is your mind blown?
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Yes
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I’m still trying to comprehend what you just said 😳 *brain is loading*
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I don’t believe this to be true. If it were, than there is no such thing as a circle. That is, if I understand what you’re trying to say.
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I know, I don’t think it’s right either, it was just supposed to be funny :p
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Oh, okay that makes sense why i didn’t get it…I don’t have a sense of humor.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
Y’all (everyone just ignore the fact that I only say that because everyone else says that…nobody says ‘y’all’ in Montana lol)….I just ran two miles today…I can’t walk anymore 😐 (that’s my bad because I hit quads yesterday so I was already sore :/) But now I seriously can’t walk 😭😭😭
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
Niceeee!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oof yess, I’ve done that before too 😅 But girlie if you ever feel the need to step away for a few weeks or however long you need, don’t be afraid to do that! We’re always here for you but we understand that we all have lives outside of KP and sometimes taking a small break can be super beneficial 🫶 And if not, that’s great t…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank youuuu! That makes me feel a lot better about my worldbuilding because I feel like I suck at it XD
Let me just info dump about the trees (don’t read this if you don’t want to, it’s a lot)
So in my story the trees are intelligent, thinking beings, and are often used as Messengers of the Great One (God). So since Azazel killed the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
omc I am sooo sorry! I just haven’t been in an RPing mood and keep forgetting about this or procrastinating XD
Not that I don’t love RP’ing… I love it with everything in me! It’s just sometimes I’m not in the mood or in the mood for other things more. Does that make sense? Not that that’s an excuse…sorry I feel bad 😕
yep we…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
Wow!!! That makes me so happy you read through that whole thing! because even i probably wouldn’t have that long of an attention span XD XD
I forgot to mention Erstonians.
Erstonia is a country that’s across the ocean from Andromeda.
The people who live there are diverse in appearances. There’s no rule for skin, hair, eyes, etc. Some…[Read more]
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