Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

Ok, here is the next section.

One night, as Aaron sat studying his Bible in the room he shared with Noah and Darrien, a timid nock came on the door.

“Come in,” said Aaron, without looking up.

The door creaked open and quiet steps pattered across the floor and came to the small table where Aaron sat. A hand tou…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

K, I added anther as well.

One afternoon Aaron and Noah returned from doing a few odd jobs for a friend in exchange for a new pair of boots. When they came in sight of the orphanage, the door crashed open and out tumbled Joseph and several other boys. “Noah! Noah do a trick!” cried Asher.

“A trick?” asked Noah. “…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It looks like you two are the only ones left! I wrote a short scene to fill in the gap left by time passage, and I wondered what y’all thought.

It wasn’t long before Darrien came home with a little boy and girl in tow. They were twins, about nine or ten years old.

Aaron and the rest were in the kitchen talking when D…

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@rae

Wow! This is making me want to read the whole thing!!!

Okay, I do have a thought. As Christians authors  we have a voice, and so when given the chance I think we should use it to point to Christ. Sooo, where is that in your book? Anyone can write a story about finding happiness. Your character is searching for peace and happiness, and…[Read more]

Ok, here is the heraldry. It’s complicated, just to warn you. I wouldn’t even attempt to etch it on the hilt. lol. I can’t find the updated version where I changed the sword on the inside and the edges of the shield to gold. It must have been lost the lasst time my laptop crashed.

@linus-smallprint

Yes, Friedrich does train with a sword. I thought I described it already…. Let me go take a look.

Ok, yes, silver hilted when he’s a prince, and gold hilted with a sapphire settings when he’s a king. I wish I could send a picture of the stile.

HEY!!!!! PICTURES!!!! YAHOOOOOO!!!!

Ok, this would be what I patterned his swo…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

“Imagining alterations” Kinda ups the creepy level in my opinion. It sounds pretty demonic and/or weird spiritual. I mean, saying “casting spells” gives us something to work off of. say “Imagining alterations” and that leaves our imagination to do the rest. I say leave it the way it is.

I’m sick. Please pray for me to get better, and pray that it doesn’t go through my family like dominoes.

Thanks

Does anyone have a September prompt list?

Paragraph 2 sentence 3 should say Honkbeast.

@linus-smallprint

I’m only at Chapter 4 right now. I hope to get caught up this week.

@theducktator

I doubt it.

@highscribeofaetherium

Do you think the townsfolk will ever find Hamster Huey’s head?

Still kinda a weird thing to call someone XD

@rae

Hamster Huey is from Calvin and Hobbes, so that’s probably where they got it from.

If Woody from Toy Story died, Andy wouldn’t never realize it. He would just keep playing with the corpse.