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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I mean like having a page in there that says, “Part 2” Like in the unabridged Little Women.
Maybe someone else from the church could go with him? Maybe because Joseph is so young, Darrien and Noah decide he needs a partner?
Someone’s jumping the gun.
How about you just hold your horses and wait and see. lololololol.
(It may be…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Well, it’s a lot to listen to. You;’ll have to tell me what you think after you’ve heard all the ones you haven’t listened to before.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
How many did you find on YouTube? I know they planned to upload all of them.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes, it is a time jump!!!! If it’s too jolting, I may split the sections into parts. I’ll see what Linus says.
Uh, no, he’s not. Aaron was a missionary. Joseph is looking to become an elder. It’s two different things. He wants to be Aaron, but he can’t. That’s not what he’s been called to do.
And I’m not really sure how much more…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yeah! I’ve found them all between the Sight and Sound YouTube channel and Pandora (Spotifi has them too) I can send some album links if you want.
haha, I bet they are.
Okay then! I’ll make sure to tag you, though you’ll want to read the chapters I’ve posted or else this’ll make no sense. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Have you listened to the soundtracks? They have them online and I’vfe listened to all of them. Daniel is going to be AMAZING!!
Haha! So all you’re doing is reading the critiques? lol. That’s funny! I hope they’re interesting. haha,
Do you want me to tag you when I post chapters?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
SO COOL!!! My friend got to see it live too! I watched it online when they streamed for free one night. I LOVE Sight &Sound, and I’m DYING to see Daniel!!!!!! I loved David so much! I feel like Esther onward took a huge turn in their music style and quality.
Ooo! What do you think from what you’ve read?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon
If this book had a theme song, this would have to be it. I have listened to it several times while editing, and this just about embodies the whole story.
What do y’all think?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon
NEXT SECTION
The wind blew gently on the roof of the little house in the middle of the great capital city of Ardenta. On the roof, his legs crossed and a Bible on his knees, was a young man. He was reading intently, and every now and then he leant over to write dow…
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Andrew replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Correction, to my understanding, I won October the 10th (and yes, I am the Aussie).
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Andrew replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Unknown Guy Whom Rae Likes: You have been weighed against the standard of your nationality and have exceeded him. Be glad, Unnamed Man, for that is a hard trial to pass.
Wow, this is a great honor. I shall hold this great honor deal to my heart. This trial I have been trying to win for… three months! I am glad that I have finally…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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FIREQUACKER posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
One of my sisters got hair chalk, so now all of us girls will be walking into co-op Tuesday with rainbow hair.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
😨
Yeah… the forum is basically all that’s left of KP 😟 I get kind of sad when I think about it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Sounds good.
Whoa! Interrogate is a strong word!
lol
Okay, well i don’t like him very much. he seems weak and kinda sulky. I mean. I don’t know, he’s a coward, and I don’t like cowards. I feel a redemption arch, but at the moment it’s hard to see. So yeah, I’m hoping for redemption, but I’m not liking him right now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I had no idea what that picture was from. i just saw the meme the other day and thought of it. It was perfect.
Sounds like you are speaking form experience here
Let’s just say, a long time ago, the last fight I had with my brother ended when mom duct taped our wrists together.
For the whole day.
We had to do school t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Ooo, that chapter was very well written. I was feeling very tense, even though I knew what was going to happen. lol.
Yeah, Tyn is in a good position. Have her do it. This will be so, so bad for Eric. Plus, Tyn is in a bad mood, so she may even scold him.
I have never met a guy that didn’t absolutely hate it when a girl scolded him.
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Hair chalk? That’s a thing? Sounds cool.