Linus Smallprint

@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m interested! I probably won’t have time until after CWW though.

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@esther-c

😂😂🤣

@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@keilah-h

H: Oh yeah, and you were humming “Fly me to the moon” three days ago and I’m sure you did it where I could hear on purpose, because you know I like that style of music and it’s the song that first got me thinking that maybe you liked me back.

S: When ya threw a chair at me while I was practicin’ the sax outside?

H: Yeah, exactly.

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Aw :/ so sad *cries*

@keilah-h

Do you have a pinterest account? If you’re logged in it should work.