Linus Smallprint

@koshka

Yay! She’s alive!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Okay. here we go again.

Lord of the Rings spoilers, depending on how far you are in the books.

Riker is Faramir. They both had cruel, unloving fathers. Riker was weaker then Faramir to start with, but by the end they both drew about even. They both resisted evil in the end, doing what was right rather then what would…[Read more]

I’m going to kill something! I wrote out the longest email ever, and KP ATE IT!!!!

@keilah-h

I tried listening to it, and it was good, but not really my style. This is what I’ve had on repeat while cleaning up the currant draft of LTBL

It’s so good!

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTXfTX00oJg&list=OLAK5uy_nOjcTiFZU4zbnTj7BTU7YDWRN_tuKF9LE&index=1

@theducktator

The lighting in the room was terrible!! It came out worse then I thought it would!!!! *sob* Oh well. Her hair actually looks strawberry blond in the real picture. Not whatever Niki pink it looks like on here.

@ellette-giselle

Thank you!

@theducktator

@loopylin

Is he? Thank you. I tried hard to make him so.

It’s going to be so sad when I kill him in the book.

@keilah-h

Maybe.

@keilah-h

Really?

Thanks!!

@ellette-giselle

Lol XD

This is Joseph when He’s grown up.

@highscribeofaetherium

I have one about bears too.

@keilah-h @loopylin @koshka

Rory

Rory jumped and spun, aiming a blow at Hunter with his fist. He pulled up just in time and froze. “Hey Hunter.” He quickly opened his fist and made a waving motion with his hand. “Hi Hunter. Hello Hunter. Hey Hunter… Hi.” Rory shoved his hands in his pockets. He could feel his ears burning and he really,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

By the way, does anyone have any advice on writing things happening during a conversation? I need more things than ‘character1 looked at/glanced at/stared at/turned to/anything else involving looking at character2′.

Do they fidget or have any nervous habits?

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, I like it!

Let’s see. How about nothing to do with the characters. Mention what’s going on around them. Someone shouted something, pans clattered, wind picked up, a bird chirped, children giggled. Etc. That might help.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, now I’m starting to believe that sign.

@linus-smallprint

I literally saw this on my way home from work. I could not restrain myself. Sorry Linus.