Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

True, bit it sort of fit him. Now I’m not sure which name to use……

@linus-smallprint

Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

Okay fine, I’ll see what I can do….

@linus-smallprint

They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.

And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.

Ah yes, “I”

 

Does that make sense?

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

I was confused through these paragraphs.…

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@the_lost-journal

Sorry it wasn’t happy.☹️ Do you at least get to start driving?

@hybridlore

Odd, I didn’t get tagged when you commented.

Good. I’m glad the timing is right.

yes, it is sad for the university, but that’s not a place they would just let alone.

Well actually, it’s Julian who recognizes Andreas, not Leon.

@the_lost-journal

Happy birthday! 🥳 You’re 15 now, right?

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th      
The Empire

We’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…

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@the_lost-journal

Happy birthday!!! 🥳🎂🎈🎈 I hope it was fun!

@keilah-h

Well, in Europe, except with a bit different geography. So Ardenta is a Celtic/French mix, Vendailia is Saxon/Britannia and the Empire is Roman/Germany

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It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

You know you’re a writer when you edit your texts because the verb used was too weak and not specific enough.

Hey, is this still a thing?

How could I forget to add the character who everyone thought to be dead crashing his or her funeral? The only time I can think of when this happened is Percy Jackson.

@keilah-h

So that is actually a term used in the medieval days. It means, “no one has explored this far, these waters are uncharted, it’s dangerous, travel at your own risk.” They would write, “here be dragons” because uncharted water is as dangerous as sailing into a place you know dragons live.

@whalekeeper

You make some good points and may have saved a life. I had a character who I’d considered killing for drama, but I’m thinking I’ll keep her alive.

I would argue that sometimes shock value is a good reason to kill characters. For example, in KotLC the stakes are supposed to be so high, and the villains so evil, and yet all of the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

So as you can see, the Empire has outposts along all boarders. So crossing boarders is not much of an option.

@keilah-h

I didn’t post a map on this book. Just the first one. I can post that again.

they are in the caves right now, but they are drawing up plans to build a village up there.

@keilah-h

they’ll be up in the mountains. If you looked on the map (which will be in the front of the book) you would see that the Empire controls these mountain ranges and the harbors beyond.

@linus-smallprint

Hmm. It just seemed odd. I mean, Rolf is clearly needing a break. Roland is married…….

Yeah, we’ll run into a couple friends again.

Plus, I did want to focus on Leon and Julian a bit more. I feel like they are starting to drift a little bit. With Leon struggling physically, and Julian having trouble with what’s…[Read more]