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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Third Chapter: A Hard Life
Trigger warning: a slap, threats, etc.
“Git your grubby fingers off that bread!” Lilitu froze. He looked longingly at the loaf of bread which might as well have been a bar of gold, before turning to face the enraged Azer. He turned to face the man, leaning on his cane for support, subconsciously tucking his twist…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Second Chapter:
Azuri screamed in agony as she pressed a hand against her round stomach.
“Nathan,” she rasped, reaching for her husband’s hand. “The baby!” Her face twisted in agony and she fell back against the pillows which were now damp with her sweat, exhausted.
Nathan squeezed Azuri’s sweaty hand, willing himself to stay calm. He tried no…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Oh my goodness I love your story! I have to find out what happens next! PLEASSSE post the next ones!!!!! You have to publish this!!!!!! It’s amazing!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Playlists for writing/rant about your favorite songs in the forum Music 3 years ago
I listen to christian music while I write.
My favorite song right now is Sweet Ever After by Ellie Holcomb! But I listen to basically every christian song you can name.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ and
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
thanks @jonas and @highscribeofaetherium ! It’s always so encouraging when you get positive feedback. Thank you so much for reading it! This next chapter seems to be a different story, but the prologue just explains the story behind how evil took over Andromeda. So don’t let the change of scene and new characters confuse you!
Here’s the next…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Wowww!! This is great!! I’d love to read the next chapter 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Hi everyone! I am writing a novel and would like some help with it. Here is the first chapter/prologue. It is supposed to be an allegory, so if you get Garden of Eden vibes, that’s why!
@jonas @esther-c @kydonandwillow
If you guys like it and want to see the next chapter, let me know!
Prologue: Elysium
Many years ago, peace reigned on…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ and
Cloaked Mystery are now friends 3 years ago -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
that would be great!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
thanks for your help! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
I know that outlining helps make stories better and easier to write, but I just don’t know how to get started. I’ve tried using Milanote and Reedsy (platforms that can help with writing) and other stuff. I’ve even looked for articles on KP and on google, but nothing seems to help!
I wish I could write a story with an outline. Want to swap? lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Oh my gosh my all time favorite book as of now is Eragon by Christopher Paolini! Anyone else read it and love it? What was your favorite part?
Fun fact: Christopher Paolini published Eragon at age 15!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
I love that idea! sounds so intriguing!
I don’t think it’s that cliche, just like @jonas commented earlier. I love the names of your characters!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
So I struggle with making outlines. I have a mentor who strongly encourages me to plot everything, but I’m more of what some call a “pantser”. I think there’s an article on KP about “pantsing” if you guys are curious what that is.
Every time I try to plot, it’s like a mental roadblock! I’ve seen articles about knowing your ending first, but that…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
it’s the only new thing I added to it, everything else is the same.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
I just finished the new chapter! It’s now at the beginning of the book, the new prologue! The original prologue is now a regular chapter. (sorry if this is confusing!)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
That’s great! I’m at almost 12,000 words currently and work on it every day. Thank you!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
oooh, I’m intrigued! Is there a way for me to read it? I love reading other people’s writing!
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