Linus Smallprint

@rae

Yeah, I was a little worried about that…do you think it would help if I gave Brenna’s master a name? The young soldier must remain unnamed, for my own reasons, but I could give the master a name. I’ll rearrange the paragraphs so it’s easier to understand what’s going on.

Yeah, I think that would help a lot.

For the title, maybe “Murderer”?

@jonas

you’re fine!! no worries! 🙂

@rae

Yeah, I noticed the same thing as Freedom. It did get a little confusing. But overall it’s really good!

@thearcaneaxiom

Um….I just listened to it and….how?????

How is that physically possible! that’s kinda disturbing, XD

It’s so good though!

Vethe

The King had a point. If she was in Celestiar, what planet was she on?

“Very well,” She said, “And if I leave?” Vethe glared at the King. “What’s to stop me from walking out of this room? You have no power over me.”

@rae

Oooh I like it!

@esther-c

Livia

“Do you know what dorm you’re staying in?” Callista asked her.

Liv shook her head. “No, I just got here. Is there a place to go check in or something? I thought there would be more people around…where is everyone?”

@hybridlore

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THAT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you!!!!!

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

I like this chapter as well!

Thanks!

Yeah, I just wanted the chapter to end on an emotional climax. I kind of wanted short chapter breaks, because I don’t like it how in books some authors make like 40 page long chapters. I kind of like it in two different chapters for some reason.

@thearcaneaxiom

I watch ALL of them. I’ve watched pretty much all of his more recent videos, so I’ve been driven to watching his older content as well lol.

Oh dear, I believe we’re hijacking this thread 🤣 at least we’re not talking about Brandon Sanderson this time XD

Hey, did you know that Shad did counseling for Brandon Sanderson-

@thearcaneaxiom

Exactly lol!

I know! Shad is just a really cool guy.

@THEARCANEAXIOM

YES.

@thearcaneaxiom

Wow! That’s really impressive! You could tell me that was Andy Serkis and I’d totally believe you!

@freedomwriter76

I know! They should get an award or something XD

@thearcaneaxiom

I want to listen…but i’m kinda scared XD

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

Here’s chapter 2, if you can’t read it today, that’s fine.

Chapter 2: Euphoria

Sef’s hands flew to her mouth to stifle a scream.

She wanted to sing, scream, cry, dance for joy.

Her mother was not sick. And she was going to have a little brother or sister!

“Really?” Sef squeaked, smiling so hard her cheeks ached, and t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

But again, I don’t think it’s graphic at all, so you’re good. <3

Okay, that helps me a lot! Thank you! I get really paranoid when I’m writing, XD

And thanks for sharing! The last one was SO SAD!!!! *cries*

That makes sense, thanks so much for helping me!

@jonas

Should I post the next one later today, or wait until tomorrow?

@jonas

four appearing at once would be panic inducing, lol.

Inserts “panik” meme

lol

@jonas

Thanks! I was actually really happy with this scene, I think it’s one of my best.

Yes, it would be Sef and Lilitu’s book. I have four chapters of that one so far, but I didn’t want to spam you guys, lol.

Yeah, I was planning to do either Neveah or Ottoline for the “teaser”, though Neveah’s would make more sense.