Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I thought all of them were. I guess Jonathan would be most interesting though.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I always forget about Brian. He should…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Nice! You hyphenated firstborn though, which is one word.

@rae

I’m glad you had fun! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🥳🥳🥳

@hybridlore

I filled out your feedback form!

@rae

Yay!!! I am so glad that you had a good time!!!!! And I am so glad that you did it! That sounds like an amazing day!

Also,

@keilah-h

Wow!! You are getting so much better at guys and girls! I can totally tell which is the girl. This looks really good!!

@the_lost-journal

Lol

thanks! That one isn’t out yet, but I do have some e that are published and for sale if you would ever be interested. 🙃

@grcr

OH MY WORD!!!!

Looking at it I suddenly realized how many of them I asked you to draw!!!! I can’t believe you pulled that off! My limit is about three people per picture and then I die. XD

THEY LOOK SO GOOD!!

Put it this way, I looked at it and new exactly who each one was, so that was brilliant!  Oh man, I can’t stop laughing…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!!

@rae

Oh man!!

I’ll be praying, Ruth! Please keep us updated!

@hybridlore

hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?

yes, I designed all of it.

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore

I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.

@keilah-h

Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.

You should totally try that!

@keilah-h

I was just listening to Ron’s theme song and I thought you and Sniper would enjoy it. XD

@theducktator

Lol, it’s still in the works. 😉

@the_lost-journal

those are funny. I just did my own because I was in the car and didn’t have access to my quote folder so I did some from my own book because I knew I wouldn’t accidentally misquote them. XD

@ellette-giselle

Two of my characters:

(MC guy just did something to save MC girl- his new bride- and it was super dangerous.)

girl: “ I don’t know if I want to kiss you or shove you off the bridge right now.”

Guy: “can I pick?”

I want to read that!

@hybridlore

lol. Maybe.

Glad it was helpful!

@hybridlore

Lovely. You disabled copy and paste on the doc. Now I have to do it all the hard way. XD

Okay, feedback answers.

OVERALL

What was your overall impression of the story?

Not sure entirely what you are looking for, but I walked away feeling really excited for the next book and also really refreshed as this is one of my…[Read more]

@koshka

Aw thanks!!!

Would you agree, @power ?

Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?