Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

I’m just basically looking for structure edits right now. This is my 4th draft, and after I go though this I’ll pass it on to my grammar/formatting editor and then move forward into getting it published. so, basically trying to make sure the story is solid, the characters are 3D, and the plot line is interesting and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

so sorry, I had to find her.

This is from three years ago, so it’s not very good. i should really redo her.

@ellette-giselle

IS THAT EVEN A QUESTION?!?

of course! I would love love love to!!!!!!!!1

@whalekeeper

First of all thank you so much!!! <3 you always know exactly what to say!

But if I’m overwhelming you or if you’re tired of listening to my rants, just let me know XD XD

I don’t know what public school is like… however you should think about who your friends are, and why the idea of leaving school gives you bad feelings. Is it mos…

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@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Anyone, (specifically Sara because this is her favorite.) Want to see a drawing of Sabina?

@whalekeeper

I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this pro…

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@jonas

I take it this chapter is before some of the ones you already wrote, since it shows them preparing to leave the house? Or are they moving a second time?

Huh? I’m confused. They’re moving a second time. They never moved the first time, because they already lived in Wrallethom Heights before the Pythonos made everyone else move there too. So…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I LOVE THIS IDEA

I’m a super visual person so this might help a lot!

@whalekeeper

I’m just gonna vent a little bit…don’t feel like you have to answer XD XD

I just have to get it all out of my system haha

I’m trying to make a hUgE dEcIsIoN that could affect my life in so many ways.

I’m trying to decide if I’m going back to public school or not this year.

Like, part of me wants to keep going just to be able to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*tries not to cry* 😭😭😭

Whaley you’re the best 💗💗💗 thanks girl

@whalekeeper

I’d probably not be convinced that they were actually dying until the last minute.

@esther-c

Ooh, yes.

Poor Cassian though.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so confused now.😂

Naturally Eloy is angry at his brother for everything he did, so he builds up anger, and then instead of stepping in front of Cass to die in his place, he HESITATES. So the opportunity is lost and Cass dies, when Eloy could have saved him.

So now Eloy has to live with the guilt that he should have and…

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@keilah-h

well, I got this one. Hmm, yeah, technology always has something wrong with it.

@savannah_grace2009

You are so welcome! Write fast my dear!!! (Otherwise I will hunt you down…..)

@ellette-giselle

unfortunately, that scene is a LOOOONNNNNGGGG ways away.

We have plenty of other heartbreaking things before then…

but thanks for being so interested in it! That means a lot!!!!!!!!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad i could be of help! I cannot wait to read this!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yeahhhh! hahaha

Thanks for letting me bounce ideas off of you!!! I really appreciate that! <3