Linus Smallprint

@rae

Yep, highscribe is right. It’s also too friendly. I mean, how dare they eat our pictures!!! This needs to be a horrible terrible villain who is completely depraved and the worst of all master villains because he chews up beautiful characters before THEY EVER SEE THE LIGHT OF DAY!!!!

How about Diablo or Viper!

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, two things. I would suggest reading this scene out-loud, because there were a few sentences that felt a little jarring and out of flow with the rest. They just needed a different word arrangement or different punctuation.

The other thing would be a suggestion, and that would be this. When Leon is running toward the…[Read more]

@theshadow

Awesome!

@rae

I like it, but it’s a bit long, and hard to scream in fury, ya know?

@theshadow

Usually when I write rivals, they end up falling in love, but I try to help.

What kind of rivals? Mortal enemies? Very competitive? I insulted you once and you insulted me back and now it’s a thing?

PICTURES ARE GONE AGAIN???? WOE IS ME! *collapses dramatically*

NOOOO WYOH IS BACK!!!!

Oh no.

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I’m a little scared……. lol. Here’s a short section.

Aaron had been speaking for more than an hour, carefully explaining the Gospel from the garden to the resurrection. Now, he looked about at the people. A few were crying, most stared at him, in disbelief, and a few had suspicion in…

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@whalekeeper

Great. Thank you so much!

Let’s see, Now to pick up the shattered fragments and begin to rebuild……. lol.

@everyone

Hey guys, can you please pray for my mom? She hurt her back yesterday and it’s causing her a lot of pain.

Thanks <3

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I kinda feel like this died out……… should I post anymore or are y’all no longer interested in it? If you aren’t that’s ok.

Thanks for all y’all’s help!

@freed_and_redeemed

Was my heart pounding or what!!!?? man that was so good!!

And harsh. Poor Riker.

Are you all done with that scene, or do you want any editorial comments?

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE THAT SO MUCH

poor Riker <333

@theshadow

If they’re genuine enemies…I’d say just make them constantly arguing or trying to show each other up, and constantly trying to do something better than the other.

Also Pinterest can help a lot with this and give you some ideas!

@theshadow

Anything specific details you want help with?

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