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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
The ship.
The way you interact with one another would be very awkward if you weren’t.
Just saying.
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already
You’re not the first, lol
It was pretty obvious. lol.
Do you mean the ship or something else? And if you mean the ship, I don’t know if I should take offence of that or not, lol, jk
Also, if anyone thinks that I am adorable because I am small and chubby, they are…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Asher would not appreciate you bringing that up again. lol.
No, not much to rewrite. Just a little.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.
I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!
Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?
Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..
(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Are you and @rae a ship now???
Yep, we boarded not to long ago actually… yep, surprise!
Sorry I moved the conversation to here, I didn’t it to be distracting to the people on Animal RP.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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HighScribe changed their profile picture 1 year, 9 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t think I’ll join, thanks for the offer, though (:
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I love that!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Finally I have something I like enough to post!

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t write animal characters. I can’t get into it like people. lol.
Thanks for the invite!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Hey, sorry it took a minute.
How detailed does that usually get?
Oh it depends. Sometimes I only have 4 or so points, and sometimes it’s close to 16. It just all depends on what points I know I need/want to hit.
What do you mean by graphing characters?
I have a sheet with the character’s name at the top. Then I add age,…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I wanted to let you know!
Thank you! That’s really considerate.
You said the story starts with all the characters entering a forest, right?
Yep
Do you want to lead the story? (If I remember, I think that’s how the Fantasy RP is working…I am still learning how RP works!) I can lead it as well.
There wasn’t really a story, Fantasy RP was…[Read more]
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