Linus Smallprint

@theducktator

XD

You are the town’s super hero. Your greatest enemy is the town’s supervillain. However, secretly you’re both brothers. This isn’t anything tragic, as your whole destructive rivalry is actually just a massive prank on your third brother, the mayor.

I will sign up for CWW if my mom lets me, which will depend on how much school I have that week.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad to hear that!

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@keilah-h

my dad had a flamenco album I used to listen to a lot when I was little haha

Spanish music is the best! I don’t understand anything they’re singing though.

@highscribeofaetherium

🤣🤣🤣

I thought this was pretty funny.

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

– Write about a character who’s lost.

– Write about a character struggling to learn a skill that in no way comes naturally to them.

– “Did I break your nose?”

– Two mortal enemies walk into a bar…

– A character breaks something important and rushes to fix it before anybody notices.

– Write a story about a character running into someone,…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@whalekeeper

huh. interesting.

I might have to look into that.

Thanks!!

@whalekeeper

is there a free version?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…

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@liberty

I really like this picture!!! So good!

Congrats on the win!

I’m glad Power judged because I wouldn’t have been able to submit anything today. With Christmas right around the corner I’m swamped!