Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Now THAT might have just been your best chapter ever. I could feel Alan, I could sense that he was completely trust the Saviour, yet there was also pain with it, but his grief was quiet by now. If you could make the grief in the chapter before this more forceful then it would beautiful contrast to the calm in this one.

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@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:

(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m a little behind here, but I should have read everything by Epiphany. Happy Feast of Stephen! My family doesn’t really celebrate Boxing Day; we celebrate my birthday!!! *excited screaming* Also, question, do you read the discussion questions in the backs of books normally? I always ignore them.😅

@highscribeofaetherium

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…

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@keilah-h

I mean, this isn’t a matter of personal conviction. This is biological and physiological sense. Few who have sense would disagree with this.

exactly. But a lot of movies and books now days basicly have it be jyst because she’s a girl she can win sort of thing. You know, “girl power” *rolls eyes*

So yeah, I was glad that they didn’t do t…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Main character of Die Hard

(which IS a Christmas movie!)

@linus-smallprint     @mineralizedwritings

So my friends got me a ticket and I went into it ready to hate it. I hadn’t seen the trailer, but the cover had a girl in armor on the front, (small spoiler, she never ends up wearing armor ever.) She wears a tight costume for one of her outfits and I don’t love it, but all the rest of her outfits are…[Read more]

@stephie

What language is your forum signature?

@janellebelovedpig

I love that sooo much!

@keilah-h

He’s adorable!

@loopylin

I have a duck like that. Her name is Jemina Cuddleduck,.

One of my sisters crocheted Howard (one of my characters) for me!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I read the part, and I think it’s a good introduction to Lilitu. I don’t know if you want critiques, so try I’ll keep it at a minimum.

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @stephie    @liberty     @hybridlore      @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr    @loopylin    @freed_and_redeemed    @mineralizedwritings    @grcr

Here’s the movie balled. Oh the music! It was amazing!!!

This is a story I can stand behind concerning women fighting. She fought when she was defending women and…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @stephie    @liberty     @hybridlore      @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr    @loopylin    @freed_and_redeemed    @mineralizedwritings    @grcr

HAS ANYONE SEEN THIS!!!!!????

It was amazing!!!! I saw it in theaters with friends and am now trying to scrape together the money to take my family! It was AMAZIN…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings    @grcr

My initial reaction when I open KP and people have changed their profile pics and now I can’t figure out who on earth this person is and why they are tagging me.

@linus-smallprint

Merry Christmas!!!

Oh I saw that coming! This is good, Linus. I do have one complaint.

 

This is an emotional moment, but I don’t see much emotion in Alan’s prayer.

I would suggest pausing in between fragments of prayer and describing what Alan is doing and feeling in that moment.

Exactly. This was just what I was thi…[Read more]