Linus Smallprint

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@keilah-h

H: Oh yeah, and you were humming “Fly me to the moon” three days ago and I’m sure you did it where I could hear on purpose, because you know I like that style of music and it’s the song that first got me thinking that maybe you liked me back.

S: When ya threw a chair at me while I was practicin’ the sax outside?

H: Yeah, exactly.

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Aw :/ so sad *cries*

@keilah-h

Do you have a pinterest account? If you’re logged in it should work.

@keilah-h @anyone-else

If you want to know what things in my book look like, like people, places, etc, here’s a link to my pinterest! I have a lot of boards with pictures that describe several characters and races in my book!

https://pin.it/3TYRfqUSE

@keilah-h

Yeah, he’s pretty cool!!!!!!!! <3 I love Xandro

@keilah-h

Here’s a good pic of what he’d look like:

@Koshka

AHHH!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

I can’t wait for more!!!

Anyone want a Marcurious scene…???

@theducktator

omc

girl you are so funny XDXDXD

@keilah-h

Xandro can’t manipulate water on his own, and he does have power, but his powers lie “dormant” unless an Aquino combines their powers with his. It basically just gives the Aquino more capacity to manipulate moisture, if that makes sense!

But without an Aquino, he’s just a normal horse…[Read more]

@grcr

HE IS SO STINKING COOL!!!

That’s slick that is!

Haha! AI murders hands!

Pockets are a good idea. My mom hates drawing hands so she always sketches her characters with them in their pockets or behind their backs. (If you want only one hand in the pocket you can turn the character slightly so that his hip and leg hides the other…[Read more]

@theducktator

YOU JUST RUINED THE TONE OF THAT SCENE!!!! XDXDXD!! lolololol.

@savannah_grace2009

That was really good! I liked it a lot! I have written a few desert scenes myself, and they always make me hot and thirsty. (Great scenes to write in the winter 😉 )

That would be really interesting for water people to be in a place where they…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

This song immediately came to mind.

Here’s a random scene from WIP

Livia and Aubrielle are currently fleeing for their lives, trying to make it to Erstonia…

Glistening sand stretched out for miles…

At first, Livia had thought it was beautiful and mesmerizing, but now she hated it with a passion.

There was sand everywhere.

Sand in her teeth, sand on her tongue, sand in h…[Read more]

@keilah-h  @liberty

I know!!! But think…. if people in our country school systems and government are trying to make us forget the holocaust….. doesn’t that seems scary. Like, what might they be trying to do in the future?

Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I know!

(btw, are you just snooping on the conversation, or did you read the story section I posted?)