Linus Smallprint

@esther-c

I also hope I didn’t come across as rude or brushing you off…I really do appreciate your thoughts because that means I need to work on foreshadowing! And explaining my book to others helps me flesh out my thoughts a little more! Thank you so much! <3

@rae

Alpha’s gonna be so mad lol

this is too good.

@loopylin

I would’ve gone for the photo. Nothing like a good photo to hold hostage. 😉

@linus-smallprint

Oh, I get it. I thought Quinton was the name.

Okay….. hmm. This’ll be interesting. Your grandmother is a woman of good taste when it comes to names if I do say so myself.

If Kleins and Roland aren’t important to the story anymore, spending too much time with them may only make the reader disappointed when they are left b…

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@linus-smallprint

Uh…. not really. It’s kind of a mess.

So wait, how many brothers are there. I got Julian, Roland, Adrian, and Quinton, (almost because I had a Quin)

Are there two or three more?

I was kind of surprised that Leon and Julian are headed out since for both of the previous books, the protagonists just ended up staying with…

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@rae

That was so good!!! I’m so worried about Baron now. 😢 He can’t die; I like him too much!

@hybridlore

okay thanks! I’ll think about it!

@esther-c

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…

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@hybridlore

okay, well I may wait until next time. i have a tone of stuff going on. We’ll see. 😉

@hybridlore

That sounds like a lot of fun!I might have to do it.

When is it?

@keilah-h

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳  Nice lizard! How old are you now?

@hybridlore

what is it?

@hybridlore

haha! And you made the rules if I remember correctly….. XD

@hybridlore

You threw ten at me, now I threw twenty back.

The 50 I’ve been saving for a rainy snowy day.

@hybridlore

I wrote 500 words.

I wrote 700 to be exact, but I’ll save those.

I shall now snowball you!!!!

SNOWBALL X20

AND

YOU HAVE TO WRITE IN YOUR WIP COLOR OF HOPE OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH 50 SNOWBALLS!

SO.

THERE.

@hybridlore

HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)

So glad you liked the section!

Yeah, poor Roland.

@rae

Nice!!! I like it! Very good scene! You had me pretty tensed up! XD

Yes, this really was a good scene.

I bet he’s gonna die in the end.

One small problem I had….. the father is encouraging Baron and Jenna’s relationship, but Baron is not a Believer, and God commands that we no be unequally yoked. I would think that if her father was…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

HELLO EVERYONE!!!! I’M BACK!!!!!!!!

I survived– barely, and am well and alive– sort of.

(Came down with a nasty cold the minute I got home. Ugh.)

Anyhow, it’s so good to be back!! I have the next section, and I may post another today as well. I hav…[Read more]

@loopylin

… May I ask what’s in Alpha’s pockets?

Ha! Took me a second to figure out where this is going……. I’ll be surprised if they’re both still alive and out of jail by the end of the day.