Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, I don’t like the sound of “convincing” people of God or sin or any other such thing.

But I do agree that our sin is a big factor.

I can add a little bit more in there though.

@keilah-h

AWESOME!!

When’s your birthday?

@keilah-h

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

It’s my favorite thing ever hahaha

@keilah-h

It’s really, really good!

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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@linus-smallprint

A cruelly twisted game. They wanted to brake Ardenta. They cut them off from their land for no good reason but to break their spirits. To see Joseph and the others give would be more rewarding than killing them. The people of the Empire have a lot of interesting beliefs about death and dying with honor and such, and seeing…[Read more]

@stephie

I HAVE RIZZ

slayyyy

@the_lost-journal

omccc

I like your name!!! It’s so cool!!!

yeah, just like Hybridlore, I didn’t know if it was your real name or not lol…

But it’s so unique and cool!

I’ve been pronouncing it “Kee-fa” *dies laughing*

@the_lost-journal

🤣🤣🤣

@linus-smallprint

wow! Long reply. A little intimidating……

Interesting. I like these ideas. I think I shall certainly use some of them! I like that gentle yet firm approach. It’s a good idea.

Huh. I think this is one of the only times I bring up Adrain….. but I may be wrong. Oh I totally agree that other religions can have…[Read more]

Me: “Nine out of ten doctors recommend that you breathe.”

Brother: “Only nine out of ten?”

@hybridlore

😂😂😂

@hybridlore

wow. It’s like -30 right now over here.

Huh. Never heard anyone describe him like that. 😅 We’ll have to see!

@the_lost-journal

No. I think you two are probably the only ones who write creepy stuff regularly.

@the_lost-journal

I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂

I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.

@hybridlore

Okay, well I’ll see if anyone else says something.

wait…. it’s 70 degrees where you are?!?!

IT’S FREEZING over here.

oh, btw, what do you think of the newest character, Roland?

@hybridlore

btw, your pfp is making me cold. XD

@hybridlore

I don’t know why…. but I’m not seeing another option, and it makes consistent sense with the rest of scripture.

If it feels like a controversial topic, I have several of those and this is not one I feel like I need to die on, so I can pull it.

What do you think?

@hybridlore

Okay, so I did sight the Hebrew’s verse about death and sins, and then of course there are all the verses about sacrifice. But here’s the sinch.

The operative word in Gen 3:21 is עוֹר which occurs almost 100 times in the Old Testament Hebrew. It is used in only two senses:

skin of a human, eg, Ex 22:26, 34:39, etc
skin/hide of…[Read more]