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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I TOLD YOU I MET HER IN REAL LIFE!!!!!
Maybe all our writing has come to life and our characters are walking around in different places!! (sounds like a movie or something)
It could be kinda scary if some of my villains got loose. 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Days passed, and slowly, Leon regained some of the strength he had lost. On the second week, he was told he could work if he wanted to, and he did so with a will. It was wonderful to be with Rolf again, and the work was not draining a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I’m glad it worked!!
Yes, poor Conrad.
🤨 That’s odd….. I feel like I said he DIDN’T cry. I can remember several times he would have, but he couldn’t. And there was the one time at the end where he cried, but I alluded to the fact that it would have been more sound than tears.
Maybe I’m missing something………..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Hey guess what?!?
I just ran into your character Hallie the other day!!! NO LIE! She looked EXACTLY like the face claim, she had the same personality from what I’ve read of your book!!!!
It was driving me crazy! She and her fiance were visiting our church and I grantee you I kept sneaking glances at her. She had on a black…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I love your signature 🤣🤣🤣
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Andrew replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
@ducktator
Can I use the lyrics of your song and put to some music?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Awesome!! I’m so glad you liked it!!!
Yeah….. Rolf had a rough time of it, but he got out sooner, whereas Leon was in the bad situation longer… things just didn’t escalate so high.
btw, was it you who asked about him changing his name? Well, if it was, you now have an answer!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
The Empire<… -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Oooo!! I like this!! This is getting good!
And, what if, what if we don’t make it?
This is a little cluncky because of the punctuation. If you did: “And what if–– what if we don’t make it?” or “And what if. . . what if we don’t make it?” either of those would work well. Use the dash if you want it to read as a sudden horrif…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Thanks you two.
As for online, I don’t trust it. I’ve heard and seen too many online things get hacked for my liking. 😅
Thanks for the suggestion though!
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Andrew replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
About his eyes on fire, is it more of just his irises or is it the whole thing?
Whole eye on fire pls
And what colors do you want his clothes to be?
I don’t really know to be honest. Whatever normal raggy clothes have in color. (sry that’s not really helpful)
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
That one.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ryla
The look on the face of the other boy told Ryla that this was not an isolated incident. Suddenly the boy on the floor grabbed his hat and leapt to his feet. Startled, Ryla fell into the wall.
The boy pointed at her. “Do you eat strawberry leaves?”
Ryla hugged her bag closer. “No?” Was that wrong? What was a strawberry? “Who are you?”
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
Thank you! I tried the Get in Touch page a week or two ago, but I haven’t heard back.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
Thank you. *bows* The concerning thing is that Kathleen’s last appearance lines up with the hurricanes…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
That’s an awfully short reply for my epic Veggietales parody.😒😂 But yeah, I have no idea. I’m hoping this post gets their attention.
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