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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Do you have an actual game this is based off?
There were several games like this medieval children played, and later on they evolved to Jacks and Marbles. So in a way, yes.
Aww!!!😍 I love this part!
Me too! So glad!!
I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering the priest from his town when he says this…and how that guy wanted to sac…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Well thank you!! Children characters always drive me insane. I dislike them so much because they are written so badly. We either have super tall toddlers or super short adults.
It’s something I really try to get right, so thanks for mentioning it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Really? How so?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ve always found that a wonderful way to connect with children and help them understand. I’m glad you liked it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh, sorry for devastating you.
Hmmm. We’ll have to wait and see.
Did you see the section I posted today?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
The days passed, and Leon threw himself whole heartedly into the work. At first, the idea of completing at task well for someone who owned him was revolting. But after one long evening of prayer, Leon felt in his heart what was right, and…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
One of the best!!!
We watch it ever Thanksgiving along with Up, and a bunch of silent films. We put them on while everyone cooks in the kitchen and does puzzles while things are in the oven.
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ll be praying for her. Yes of course. No need to make it miserable for her.
Thank you
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh no! Poor girl.
I’ll be praying for her. Yes of course. No need to make it miserable for her.
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Just wait on that would you? Ruth’s having a bad day and I don’t want to make it worse.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Well, we got her to do it last time.
I’ll just go copy and paste the whole conversation on here so that when she wakes up and takes a look it’ll have already happened and she’ll have to post it.
😁
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
My friend, clearly, you wouldn’t say that to his face. Julian is a very noble creature. He is a warrior, but is also has all the manners of a gentleman. Or gentlehorse I should say. He is what you would call a warrior poet, though in equine form. He has the utmost decorum around ladies, human and equine alike.
Okay, okay. It just was n…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
LOL, I love that movie, XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
AW!! I love the one of the girl! Your people are always so cute!
WOW! That’s good! It may be a little rough, but the proportions are fairly correct, and that is the hardest part to do! It’s good!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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oh wow!
so in order to exert his power he needs to steal from her. Interesting.
yeah, he gets power off of the lies she believes. but she doesn’t know that yet.
ohhhh! ok that makes sense.
I feel terrible for her. That life seems excruciating.
yeah…it is *cries*
Wait whattt
Iverrrr 🧐
PLOT TWIST BWAHAHAA
What’s the twist? I didn’t see a twist, but that might’ve just been me.
Because TIGIN showed up…the same Pythonos that tried to kill Liv in the desert, and the same Pythonos that held Ottoline captive…he survived the tidal wave and he knows Iver!
Oh I’d forgotten his name.
ohhhh okay! so it’s all coming together.
YESSSSS
bwahahahahha
Oh my goodness, poor Sef. *is slightly traumatized* Lilitu, save her!
I KNOWWWWW
XXD