Linus Smallprint

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
The Empire<…

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@theshadow

Oooo!! I like this!! This is getting good!

And, what if, what if we don’t make it?

This is a little cluncky because of the punctuation. If you did: “And what if–– what if we don’t make it?” or “And what if. . . what if we don’t make it?” either of those would work well. Use the dash if you want it to read as a sudden horrif…[Read more]

@keilah-h

@hybridlore

Thanks you two.

As for online, I don’t trust it. I’ve heard and seen too many online things get hacked for my liking. 😅

Thanks for the suggestion though!

@grcr

About his eyes on fire, is it more of just his irises or is it the whole thing?

Whole eye on fire pls

And what colors do you want his clothes to be?

I don’t really know to be honest. Whatever normal raggy clothes have in color. (sry that’s not really helpful)

@keilah-h

That one.

@keilah-h

The one that hit Florida. Milton, I think.

Thanks!

@beth-torres

Ryla

The look on the face of the other boy told Ryla that this was not an isolated incident. Suddenly the boy on the floor grabbed his hat and leapt to his feet. Startled, Ryla fell into the wall.

The boy pointed at her. “Do you eat strawberry leaves?”

Ryla hugged her bag closer. “No?” Was that wrong? What was a strawberry? “Who are you?”

@koshka

Thank you! I tried the Get in Touch page a week or two ago, but I haven’t heard back.

@beth-torres

Thank you. *bows* The concerning thing is that Kathleen’s last appearance lines up with the hurricanes…

@the_lost-journal

That’s an awfully short reply for my epic Veggietales parody.😒😂 But yeah, I have no idea. I’m hoping this post gets their attention.

@freed_and_redeemed

Great job!!!! I really liked it! I sure was nervous for them!

Poor Riker. I am really excited to see Erich show up!! He was a character I really liked from the last book. I’m really happy to see him again. I hope he gets a lot of “screen time”. 😂

I am wondering why Leon and Riker seem to be struggling with the lessons we…[Read more]

@keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon    @hybridlore     @linus-smallprint

So, in answer to all the questions:

the laptop did an un-authorized update. So while I hit save on all my documents, I still had them minimized instead of fully closed. Normally it tells me about the update and offers a time. I then shut everything fully down, make sure it’s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Umm… Perehapes he was a slave, or at least treated like one, earlier in his life, along with his brothers and cousins. They escaped, and tired to help other slaves.

🤨

I wrote like two paragraphs of his backstory.

This is Omar we’re talking about.

Have you read the section where he introduces himself to Leon??

Okay l…[Read more]

🎵How do you join Kingdom Pen?

You just fill out a form!

I tried that, but they work no more!

That’s odd.

I know I thought for sure!

Have you tried the contact page?

I’ve gotten no reply…

Oh, that used to work, but now it won’t.

I think that I might die.

Where have all the moderators gone? What happened to the articles? The new people…[Read more]

@esther-c

Noooo, poor Tyler. 😭

“I’m not sure. I’ll have to discuss it with your dad first. Maybe we can talk about it during dinner.”

As much as Hallie hated to have a conversation like that over dinner in front of all her siblings

Hallie could feel the curious, snickering gazes of her five other siblings boring into the back of her head

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@freed_and_redeemed

Poor Riker. I hate Franz.

@beth-torres

Ryla

Ryla stopped as she heard loud chatter. Maybe if she just stood against the wall and stared at the floor people wouldn’t notice her. Suddenly a boy shrieked and fell over her foot. Ryla started. The boy looked up at her.

“The floor… What a great place to delve in the deep depths of sorrow and ponder unanswered questions,” he…[Read more]

@rae

This had better not be Baron!

I’ve been wondering this too. One of my characters is in a similar predicament. Like Whaley suggested, she wrote letters to those she loved. Some of this will depend on whether your character is at peace with their death or not. *subscribes because I’m stuck too*