@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
In this chapter, you did a better job of showing Leon and Julian are in a place they used to call home. And I’m not just referring to their comments upon seeing the village in the valley. Their interactions with the Klein family, falling right into the traditions, showed this even better than their words.
I like the feel of the…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
What section? Kingdom Pen, why didn’t you tell me about this? *Goes back to read*
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m not sure I like that last comparison. Kalmar is amazing, and Eric…drives me crazy. No offense. I’m just still mad he betrayed Martha.
Who would you compare Eric to then?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Alan looks a good deal less….bookish?…..than Alcatraz (where did he get THAT name anyway? Who wants to be named after an island with a jail on it?) though
Alcatraz was named after Alcatraz the First, a famous occulator who lived around the same time that the pyramids were built. Alcatraz’s family frequently uses these traditional nam…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Thanks for the suggestions. I think I’m likely to include all of those eventually.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’ve also compared Alan to Prince Zuko, Elsa, and Cloud Strife, but I think Alcatraz fits him best.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@raxforge @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
I’m one of the nerd who wants people to think he’s cool, so I use Crossway’s Elect Standard Version.
I wounder what the Bee would do with the LSB. Maybe Lazy Scholar’s Bible? (Since the translators were so lazy they didn’t even bother to translate some words from Greek/Hebrew to English)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m getting if the wolf in Little Red Riding Hood was good kinda vibes.
Kind of I guess, though that girl only appears in this scene. Wolves are always bad guys, and since they are my favourite animal, I wanted to change things up a bit. However, the wolf character, Stripe, isn’t exceptionally good. This of it as having a s…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @keilah-h
Thank you all of you.
For those of you who have read my draft, do you have any requests for my next illustration? I’m thinking of either a fight scene or Alan in prison.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?
Not that I am aware of. We can just call him Phil.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
What translation of the Bible do you prefer?
NIV: The Nearly Inspired Version
NLT: The Not Literal Translation
KJV: The Knoweth Jesus Version
NKJV: The Not Knoweth Jesus Version
NASB: The Nerdy Academics’ Snooty Bible
ESV: The Elect Standard Version
CSB: The Cool Southern Baptist version
(Translation names taken from the Babylon Bee)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper
The drawing you’ve all been waiting for (I will upload this to my google drive photos as well):
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
“Ah, love. It’ll make you jump into a snake filled marsh and take on a guarded convent single highhandedly–– despite the fact that the king has a price on your head–– to rescue the one you love. Sometimes love is dunderheaded!”
This quote feels familiar to me, but I cannot recall what it is from.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Julian reached over for his rucksack. “I wonder what Amelia packed,” He opened it and looked through the contents. “Lots of bread, dried meat, corn meal, dried fruit… oh yes! Raisin cakes!”
I like Rasins. Good for Leon and Julian not rejecting them.
They started off through the woods, looking up at the tall trees about them. The…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Gak!
Where?!? Quick, grab some straw!
(did you draw that?)
No. It’s from a comic strip called ‘Customer Service Wolf’, which is about a pack of wolves who run a bookstore and have to deal with annoying customers. Since I am currently working in retail, I find it kind of funny and relatable.
wait…… how did you know I don’t like…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I have already started working on her origin! I was thinking maybe that she had a test or a choice that was like a choice from God, and she was given the curse of immortality or something like that! An example was she was given the three choices between riches, wisdom, and immortality (Because those are the three things almost…
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