@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
*plays how to train your dragon theme song*
By the way, did you read what I decided to do with my magic system? You were the one who was encouraging me to keep it the way it was the most. While I have made my choice and am going to stick with it, I am curious to see what you think.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
(You can do whatever you want with them, to be clear. :p)
I know. But I think they would end up together, so I think I will let it happen. Sometimes it’s just interesting to watch your characters do their own thing.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
This is a list of all the suggestions of romance between Alan and Martha – that I can find.
Wow.
Some of those were not meant to be that. Martha was always just a little older than Alan even before I had any ideas of putting them together. I can see why everyone (including myself) ends up wanting them to marry.
You missed o…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Thank you very much for the feedback! I few comments/questions I have on it:
You also got me rooting for a romance between Martha and Alan! Don’t know whether that was intentional or whether us readers were just like “get them together.”
Not completely intentional. When I started working in this I put my foot down, saying ‘no roman…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
*facepalm* I just remembered I never filled out the feedback document. I’ll do that soon.
No worries. I look forward to your thoughts!
This seems like a good compromise. I intend to continue reading. Do you know when book 2 will be done?
Awesome! I intend to finish a draft of it this year. Hopefully with some time to spare before 2…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
My plan is to start on this at the beginning of Febuary
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
of course, I haven’t read the changes yet, but from what I think I’m understanding you saying, this seems like a really good option. I’m definitely still going to be reading. (unless I end up hitting some snags with the new way you chose to do this, and then I’ll let you know if I need to stop.)
Thank you! I’m happy you approve…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie
Okay. It’s taken some time. I’ve put a lot of thought into this, but I’ve finally decided on what to do with my magic system.
I decided to change it up a bit.
We won’t know exactly how it works. One reason why I’ve decided on this is because of the narrator. He, being someone who…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago

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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
I kind of want to watch Gravity Falls, and I don’t know why because usually this type of cartoon turns me off. However, I don’t have a streaming service that has it so I’ve never gotten around to it. Also, none of my siblings are interested. Maybe one day…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Think I like Veil of Night better than Let the Be Light. I find Joseph more relatable than Aaron. I’ll go into more detail about this when I give you the feedback. I do have to go now and get ready for school.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I really can’t believe that you take the time to reread the whole book! Thank you so much!
I find it helps me to remember things and notice smaller details I have otherwise missed. Also, I’m sitting around on the train with nothing to do anyway on my way to school, so why not?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Yes.
I finished rereading your book yesterday. I will try to get feedback to you soon.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
Nice Cat eye. I don’t know why, but I find drawing animal eyes very satisfying. Somehow it is easier to focus on the shading and the result often ends up being very realistic. Good job with the fur around it as well. I like your rose as well. The cross-hatching is an interesting style. Thank you for sharing!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
That sounds interesting. I am helping out a few other people with their WIPs right now, so I don’t know how much time I will have to help you, but I wouldn’t mind hearing a little more about your characters.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
You should come down and visit ours! lololol.
Ha ha! That’s a bit of a loooong trip for me.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
@theshadow
Here is a chart I was given at one of our C&C events going over some of the views. I think it gets Amillennialism a little wrong. (It seems to be made by Premillennials). I know I said Post earlier, but I think my pastor is actually a Pre. You might need to open this image in a new tab to read everything on it. One thing not mentioned…[Read more] -
Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Sorry, I keep on forgetting about this and prioritizing other things. I don’t think I will be participating in this one again.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
nope, I have two brothers and 1 sister.
Ah.
I honestly think that it’s not good to have that big of a congregation. We’re called to fellowship with the believers and uplift, encourage, and hold one another accountable. I find that hard to do when you don’t know the people in your church. *shrug* that’s just my opinion.
As someone…[Read more]
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