@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @grcr @hybridlore @theducktator
Just checking, did you see this?
I should probably tag some more people as well:
@whalekeeper @liberty @raxforge @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
None of you have to read this, but I do want to make sure this notification is coming through. And my sister would greatly appreciate…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Was that response cut off partway through?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Okay. I know there were some concerns about the security of Google. So, I decided to try out Proton Drive instead, which is more secure. So far, I don’t like the interface much. It’s slow and lacks some basic features. But let’s see how this goes. Here is a link to a folder that…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Sure, I’d be good with that. Who are you thinking on my end? I can’t over develop because then you lose track of the MCs, but I do want the characters to seem real.
Great!
I’ll leave the exact characters you pick up to you, but I suggest either protagonists or side characters (Like Noah, David, or Aelic), that you’ve been not…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
If all else fails, remember that your guys’ stories, no matter what they are, will make so much more impact in the world than mine.Â
And don’t forget either that there are plenty of other gifts other than writing, so even if your writing isn’t as impactful as ours, there are other ways you can bring Glory to God as well. And God can ev…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
I’d like that. But even more, I wanted it to wake people up to the fact that not too long ago, it could mean death to believe in God. I feel like many people take Christianity too lax. Just a sort of, yeah I’m good and go to church and will go to heaven. I want to wake people up to the fact that this is 100% a war, and if you tre…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 13th out now!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Here, some Bible verses for you right now:
10 As each has received a gift, use it to serve one another, as good stewards of God’s varied grace: 11 whoever speaks, as one who speaks oracles of God; whoever serves, as one who serves by the strength that God supplies—in order that in everything God may be glorified through Jesus Chr…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Sorry to make you depressed. I know I do have a tendency to see the negative over the positive. (Just ask my sister, Ellie, about the feedback I give her on her books!) Others like Liberty and Hybridlore seem to be enjoying it, though, so don’t you take my feedback as a sign that this shouldn’t be written. I know Leon is one of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Yikes! Bad Smaug!
btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?
I suppose you could start earlier.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
https://1drv.ms/w/c/bcdce8f567320b25/ETDxCG51PcpJg0VV9oF5LxAB-hfZiwM2BGSvsV_bbcIq3w?e=sauIgi
That’s a messy looking link, that is. You should click on it. It might contains some Book feedback!!
Hopefully, Microsoft Word is still acceptable.
I didn’t get around to rereading the book this time. But this is what my thoughts…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Yeah. Plus, Martha would be more comfortable if she wasn’t alone with a bunch of guys. It would be better if Eric was awake, but since he’s not, she’s glad Sara is there.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks ago
That’s a fine mecha dragon!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 12 out now!
I was talking to my sister last night about the story, and we decided on a couple of things that would make us both more comfortable reading and writing in the story, which would also make things less awkward for the characters. However, I still will not rewrite…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 11th is out. I’m not too happy with this. I’m not sure I got Martha right in here and this kind of feels like a filler event. (Though it still moves the story forward.) I will press on.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Yes
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
How come I am not supprised that you are the only one here who knows about The Game? (Which you just lost, again.)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
The game where you do not think about the game, for if you think about the game, then you have lost the game.
Rules:
- If you know about The Game, you are playing it. (Some people say that everyone is playing The Game, whether they know about it or not.) You cannot refuse to play.
- Whenever you think about The Game, you lose.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I have a friend who has a 30 minute timer on his phone so that he can remind his girl friend about it.
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