Linus Smallprint

@keilah-h @stephie

(also, how come humans aren’t a little more upset that lyens seem to think they’re the dominant species? Is there a human-centric country or are they just all over without a specific homeland?) 

Yes, the humans are upset, this just hasn’t been the focus of the story, and with other things to focus on, such as getting rid of the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, but do they have plans to take over the solar system as well?

Sun == Warm Canada

Mercury == Lesser Canada

Venus == Poisonus Canada

Earth == Canada Major

Mars == Red Canada

Astroid Belt == Floaty Canada

Jupiter == Stormy Canada

Saturn == Ring Canada

Neptune == Blue Canada

Uranass == Canadass

Pluto == Canada that is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Haven’t seen it, and didn’t have any plans yet. When my brother saw the trailer, he reported the protagonist was a Mary Sue, which turned our family off. But now you’ve peeked my curiosity. I didn’t realize Peter Jackson was directing it.

@stephie

Eek I ranted sorry.

No worries. I rant all the time, just ask @ellette-giselle.

Thank you both for your feedback on the emotional scene. Heh heh. Maybe one day I will learn how to make my characters emotional, but your advice will help me, thanks for it. Where would the both of you say the emotion fell off in the chapter? Was it around…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Do the races of Ehverwyld have a Christmas equivalent?

Possibly? The only holiday I have figured out for Klaw is Arsakora Day, which is a lyenized kentor holiday in spring to celebrate trees. (It was talked about in Chapter the 12th – The Memory). I know they have some winter holiday, but it could be very similar or very different to our…[Read more]

@liberty

I haven’t actually participated in any of these yet, so don’t worry about me too much. But I am more likely to participate in this if it runs in the new year to keep writing while I take a break between drafts.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Next chapter.

Chapter the 33rd – The Father

I’ll see you after Christmas with the final chapter! Merry Christmas to you all!

@ellette-giselle

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get to become Christians before something bad happens. You know.

Yes. It’s not always God’s will to save everyone we want to be saved, and I’m kind of glad you included it because of that. Your story could become d…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hard to be friendly when you have sharp teeth.

*Sends meme to my sister (not the one who wrote A Parched Land)*

@liberty

No, I’m concentrating on finishing my main WIP right now. Maybe in the new year I will participate in one of these.

Also, saw your wolf drawing here. I like wolves. Nice!

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, ofc, use them for whatever you want.

Thank you!

@ellette-giselle

Was Liam’s original name Ezra? I caught a second sentence other than the one hybrid mentioned where you called him that instead:

Sabina kept on doing it, and Ezra relaxed. Sabina pressed gentle fingers against his wrist and then looked up at Joseph. “He’s slipping,” she said softly.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Chris…[Read more]

@keilah-h

What about nonwizards that are still half animal?

I haven’t put to much thought into this. But they are half-animal because of a curse so…

I’ll leave it up to the reader for now.

@theducktator

Nooooooo! I knew Charles was doomed.😭 I don’t think Alan will go back to magic again. I find it more likely he attempts to free Charles again, but Charles still dies somehow.

When I saw you asking for more, my thoughts were She’s onto me. But this is the way Charles’ story goes.

So what do you think Alan should do?

@ellette-giselle

Other then that……I don’t know if I want to say it was good because this is so bad. Poor Alan. But it was a……. hmmm……. a well done chapter.

Thank you!

He just asked for forgiveness, not mercy. They often go hand in hand, but they are not the same. To forgive doesn’t mean you take away the punishment.

Good point.
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@ellette-giselle

Only Beric remained cold toward them. No, it wasn’t really coldness, Joseph decided. It was more of a hesitance and perhaps fear. He reminded Joseph of a wounded animal. He often sat in the corner and watched the children from a distance. He flashed angrily if any reference was made to his injured leg, and he only spoke when n…

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@stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Messed up the last link. The correct one is in my previous post on here.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, sorry, I got confused and messed the link up.

Here is the correct one:

Chapter the 32nd – The Cost

@highscribeofaetherium

I know you haven’t been following it, but I hope you don’t mind if I just use all my snowballs for my current WIP. I just found out I have to work a lot through the holidays, so I want to focus on TNPT: The Cost – Draft 2 so I can achieve my goal of completing it before the year ends.

@theducktator

There, just did a chapter with 2,458 words.

I don’t feel like throwing any snowballs at the moment, so I’m going to build a fort with the 16 snowballs I earned from that.