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@whalekeeper @rae @keilah-h this doesn’t directly affect your characters yet but im tagging you anyway

Rallascant

Rallascant had been shooed away from the vegetable garden by the local Iris many times, but this time he was sure he would get away with it. He sat among the green leaves, legs and rabbit ears tucked in to remain as unnoticeable as…[Read more]

@liberty

Praying!

@koshka

Yay! I was able to find a copy on Libby. Looking forward to this!

I have the desire to add a new little guy to this. A guy with fun frilly sleeves

@koshka @loopylin

Moth

Well done. Moth’s chest rose a little.

He tilted his head in a sort of shrug, eying his attempt. It looked like he had some skill – even though that was not true. His initial wish for the shot had been much humbler. “I must make offerings to serendipity in my sleep. How do I know where the arrowhead will fly?”

@liskaboyce

Yeah, the middle part of a story is always the weirdest part. Koshka and Quicksilver made good points. I think a huge part of it is coming up with obstacles, and then connecting them to lead to the midpoint.

Follow-up question. Is it possible that the structure isn’t the issue, but that it’s incredibly difficult to think of actual…[Read more]

@koshka

I’ll see if I can borrow this through my library! I was planning to get into my local library this week anyway. Interlibrary loans should give me access to this.

I haven’t read Adorning the Dark, but I’ve heard of it. I’ve heard good things about it. It has a lovely title.

@grcr

In the space of a couple days, we’ve started making new accounts for people again, and this is the result. Lots of people. 😅

@stellybean

Haha! I love that! Robbin Hoodie!

Ooo yes! I love that you would want a fiction big brother. I have a list….. lol

@stellybean

Robin Hood. The original animated one with the fox. I could (and already do) watch is consistently and love it more every time. ❤️

The best robbin hood movie of all. Fight me. XD

@stellybean

Hello hello! I’m so glad you’ve gotten on KP at last!

I’m Ellette! I’m an author if fantasy, dystopian, and Historical fiction for middle grade, YA, and adults. I am also the owner of a publishing company, a content editor, and an artist/graphic designer.

What are some of your top favorite books?

If you could pick to spend a…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Beth did well. No need for disappintment.

Tavar

A waterfall of words slipped from Bryce. Tavar leaned forward in his seat, eyes wide, mouth parted to catch any stray droplets of knowledge.

The vital organs and their shapes and significance to the body rushed past his imagination. This was not about the mind then. That fit the…[Read more]

@lillian

you are very welcome!

No problem, let me know if you are ever open to it.

@beth-torres

@whalekeeper

@renegade

idk if any of you have time right now to critique,  but Lillian has a story to share. Tag some others if you think they would be good sources for fantasy critiques.

looks like I can’t move this whole post to another category, so that’s fine. If you end up doing a second critique/book post i’d suggest you put it under the critique section so it’s easier to find,

Let me tag a couple people for you.

@lillian

Okay, here’s how to tag people.

If you look at our profile picture along the side of the posts we make, we have our name under the picture and that’s in green. Below that is an “@” with the user name next to it. So you would see “@lillian” under yours. Under mine you would see “@ellette-giselle”

You can type out or copy and paste…[Read more]

ohmygoodness waitttt I’ve been gone a while, what happened!!!? ohmegoodness KP is alive again!! <3

ahhhhhhhhhh this was such a good surprise to come on to