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@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

The worst part is, the character is super fun to write. I could have just killed off a stereotypically ‘good’ character, but it had to be the fun one. I’m so tempted to bring them back, even though it’s against my no-artificial-second-coming policy.

@whalekeeper

OH NO!!!

@keilah-h

We think one might fit: Captain Fry. He’s stocky and grumpy, but eloquent when nobody expects it. And he’s suspicious of the Longtreaders at first, which could translate into Gimli’s aversion of elves. His undying loyalty to them once that’s overcome fits well too!

Unfortunately, everyone in my family has a different mental image of…[Read more]

There’s a character I’ve really got to kill, but I really don’t want to.

Contrary to popular writer tradition, I’m not just killing them off because it’s more emotional, it’s legitimately required for the plot to work. Pain.

@godlyfantasy12

Hey girl! Sorry I couldn’t chat last time :] I’m here now because I have a paper to write off and on tonight.

@the_lost-journal

You should be fine! I’ve heard that name in other books and projects. Unless it seems like a name with too much of a pop culture association (like Elvis or Hermione, or whatever), there’s no reason not to use it.

@theducktator

Can’t say I loved the Anne of the Island triangle, but I definitely liked it better than what I see in modern stuff.

Evangelistic dating is dating/becoming romantically attached to a lost person with the hope that the relationship will lead them to God. Obviously, not a good udea to go into a relationship like that. It’s not h…[Read more]

@r-m-archer

🙂

Yeah, that might help. And it might not. I personally haven’t gotten tags in months, but I often hop on when I have a free moment and lurk patrol around.

It’s been a very chatty place recently. As evidenced by the fact that newer KeePers are bumbling about in the guise of Eccentric Mentors and Chosen Ones.

@r-m-archer

Fabulous! That helps a lot. Thank you for imparting your wisdom. 🙂

I’ll probably look into getting it later this month.

@liberty

Bwahaha! XD You did a great job capturing his personality in the aesthetic.

I saw the shofar/horn and satchel with scrolls and wondered if he served as a messenger, a fitting occupation for a wanderer. On a flip side, if the scrolls were scripture, I thought he might be connected to your world’s True Religion. Maybe friends with a…[Read more]

@theducktator

Vyette, what does a normal morning look like for you? Does your family allow you to make important decisions yet?

Barnes, what is your most embarrassing moment?

[Pauses, as if deciding to skip over a few things]

“I get angry when I’m embarrassed, and I was furious when my parents put me in the school district pageant. They wanted…[Read more]

@r-m-archer

Oh, that’s a great article! Thank you for sharing. It gave me several ideas. (As did your article on false religions, which I read right after that one.)

Also, it’s so good to see you around here again!

@whalekeeper

Well, everyone made theirs much less complicated than what I was thinking, so I’m glad I waited. lol. I think I basically agree with what the others have said. I do like a first person narrative, if it’s well done and really used to contribute to the texture of the story.

I also think that not every style that’s technically “wordy”…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I smell undiagnosed ADHD, and a strong dose of wanderlust.

yep

I have a sketch of them I drew several months back, never finished, so I’ll have to dig that out and post it or something.

please do I’d love to see

@elishavet-pidyon

Still haven’t got proof that she’s alive.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Y’all are terrible. 🤣

@liberty

• He’s a rolling stone/without roots/drifter.
• He’s curious about things.
• He likes to work with wood/whittle.
• He’s a messenger, or somehow connected to the clerical/Levitical circle.
• He’s either a strategist, or stuck in a tight situation.
• Despite his youth and friendly demeanor, he can fight like a cat.
• He’s more of the…

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@loopylin

Ok, I love Flaz. He’s hilarious

heehee thanks!! I love writing him XD XD

Melissa is really cute, btw!! 💛💛

@theducktator

I literally agree with everything you said. Everything.

Especially first-person writing. There are some good books written fp, but besides those I don’t really like it.

@ellette-giselle
We shall mourn Koshka greatly 💔