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  • whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @rae

    Plus, one of my beta readers is a YouTuber

    That’s something I’ve never heard before XD

    It’s also going to be very interesting because she is a self-professed therian, but is already a fan of my art and Baron (she literally made fanart of him)

    Nor have I heard that. You’ve found a diverse pool of beta readers.

    I’ve been on KP for over two yea…

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  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    Nice. How long do you think it’ll take to get their feedback and work through it? (Your guess, of course 🙂)

    I’m assuming by February. Which could either be a good guess or will have senior authors shaking their heads. The way I figure is that they probably won’t go through it fast at first due to Christmas and New Year’s, and school s…[Read more]

  • whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @rae

    I’m gonna wait for Keilah to rp

    👍

    Yes. I have two confirmed beta readers at the moment, plus a friend who I’m going to ask, and someone who I have to double check with (because they are not Christian, and they said they would be okay reading it, but I want to make sure. I really don’t want them to feel forced into something.)

    Nice. How long…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    I’m gonna wait for Keilah to rp, since Idk what to do with Gabriel at the moment, so this is kinda a good time.

    Oh wow! Are these beta readers for Baron Chronicles? I didn’t know you were that far along in the editing process.

    Yes. I have two confirmed beta readers at the moment, plus a friend who I’m going to ask, and someone who I…[Read more]

  • -GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months ago

    I am working on drawing all my 600+ peoples alphabetically, and I decided to start with B…for no reason in particular. I have five left.

    Unfortunately it’s missing my girlie Billie because I created her after I started this… ugh.

     

  • whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @rae

    Oh wow! Are these beta readers for Baron Chronicles? I didn’t know you were that far along in the editing process.

    @keilah-h

    Lucille

    The foliage was so thick that they sat in relative comfort underneath it. It was like standing under the awning of a shop. The wood creaked up and down, like a oak and glass door, opening and shutting under…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @whalekeeper @keilah-h

    Sorry, I was literally preparing an NDA yesterday (for my beta readers) and then went off to do some other stuff.

    Gabriel Mai

    Gabriel eventually stopped by a short tree. that grew up part of the labyrinth wall. Despite the narrow trunk, which looked like strands of wood twisted together like a candy, the tree had thick…[Read more]

  • Loopy replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago

    @theducktator I plan on replying eventually. Sorry for taking so long

  • Loopy replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago

    @mineralizedwritings

    To: Flax, 21st Palace avenue Guest unit #5

    From: Brea Thorne, Thorne Mansion, N. Elm Street, Linmaus

     

    Dear Flax,

    I am busy with many things such as school and piano lessons and taking care of Mother. It is a lot, and I don’t want to fall behind in my studies. I suppose writing to you won’t be such a waste of time,…[Read more]

  • @whalekeeper


    Lois

    The clock turned to five, and some of the students cheered as a tall man stepped up to the podium at the front of the room. He smiled pleasantly and held up a hand to silence them.

    “Please, everyone, take a seat. I know you all are very hungry and tired from your travels here, so I will try to make this quick. I am H…[Read more]

  • @theducktator @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

    Lois

    Lois turned away from his short interaction with Viktor, to see a teammate go down with a ball to the face. He looked to where the ball came from, and saw Felicity, standing near the front of her team. She winked at him, then threw two more balls in quick succession, one at him and one at Viktor.…[Read more]

  • “I think the hardest thing about jumping off a bridge would be deciding whether to do a front flip or a back flip.” -my friend’s brother

     

    “Are trees categorically considered plants?”-a coworker

    “I’m jealous of my shoes.” -My cousin

    “Autism is a spectrum, selfishness is just a thing.” -My dad

     

    My cousin, texting me: “You simpil tun”

    Me:…[Read more]

  • @whalekeeper Hehe I love that

    Speaking of funny quotes, I do have some from you…

  • whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @keilah-h

    K!

    @rae

    Should they put together a makeshift camp or something? Make a plan? Ik that’s not the most fantastical thing ever but they both seem like the type of character to do that. Got any ideas? XD

  • @grcr

    I’ll just casually pretend that I didn’t read that. 

    Pure genius! 😉

    I probably should go through and add things to differentiate/clarify. I most likely will, idk.

    The first two chapters of this book are really difficult, but I promise things become a bit easier later.

    Got it! And I get the struggle. You don’t want to info dump or…[Read more]

  • @ellette-giselle

    XD

    Dante

    The chair moved down the sidewalk a couple yards before slowly rolling to a stop. Dante turned to see Rory’s puzzled expression, and then burst out laughing. Then he doubled over, holding his side.

    “Heh, ow, hehe… there’s no way that wasn’t a bit,” he said, barely managing to hold back more laughter. “Seriou…[Read more]

  • -GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago

    @hybridlore

    Ah. No one “on screen” got shot, just the neighbors in the background, if that makes any sense.

    😜

     

    @elishavet-pidyon

    🤍🤍

    I also thought it was interesting how Elia’s comment “it’s dangerous out there” put all the danger outside, so when it was followed by cozy family time, we felt safe inside. Like the Igby Cottage in WFS. Then ev…

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  • whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @rae

    Lucille

    None of that sounded like a definite answer, so Lucy shrugged. She was just as interested in becoming a secretary, anyway.

    A clap of thunder rumbled in the distance. Bugs chirped louder as if getting their last voices in before something louder arrived. Gabriel and Lucy sped up, jogging over leaf piles and patches of heather.

  • @whalekeeper @loopylin @ducktator
    Oof… Celerant just put Viktor in an awkward place. His deep sense of justice won’t like that. XD

    Viktor

    He was going to have a headache. Not from a strike or anything, but from this whole unruly ordeal.

    “Great job!” He passed a ball to a lanky kid with the aim of a sniper. The kid nodded and pegged another…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum Roleplays 10 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    XD

    Gabriel Mai

    “That depends. Right now? No. You don’t have the strength nor the experience. In the future possibly, though I will say, there is yet to be a woman monster hunter where I am from. But if a woman had the will, and the strength to back it up, I guess it could be okay, though women should be protected like children…[Read more]

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