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@jenwriter17 @kaya-young  Alrighty!  Here you go.  Thanks again!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11AHdPPXbizqzep23-mmpjsj1HndllfhrEjVt5cOq1Oc/edit#

@ingridrd  Umm.. Whatever you want to do, but posting it on here would work best for me. 🙂

@sage-g @notawriter @ariella-newheart @sarah-anson

Could one or two of you possibly draw me a character, please? 🙂

Randal—is 17, has auburn hair, green-yellow eyes, and a soft smile.  He has a long white scar down the side of his neck.  Clothing-wise, anything casual, probably just a T-shirt and jeans.

Hopefully that’s enough info!  😉

@jenwriter17  @kaya-young  Thank you both so very much for putting time into commenting on this for me!  Would you like me to post the entire book here or…?

@kaya-young  Wow, thank you so much!  I can definitely post the entire book if you want.

Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes.  🙂 🙂

@ingridrd   What!?! The whole book is written and you aren’t letting me read err, critique it all at once? 😉

This story is awesome! I thought that the first two chapters were suspenseful, but the ending chapter four really sucked me into the story. 🙂 🙂 🙂

Have you written any other books and where can I buy them?!?

@jenwriter17  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.  🙂

To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young

Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

And here are the pics…

So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]

@catwing  I’m still developing her superpower but she can camouflage herself to blend in with anything.  🙂

@daughteroftheking  Ooh!  I like it.  🙂

@kaya-young  THANK YOU!  And I love that seal…  🙂 🙂 🙂

I will post more parts after I get a few more people to read it.

@ingridrd    Ahh! I read it and I love it! What will happen next?  

<span style=”color: #000000; font-family: ‘Roboto Condensed’, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; font-style: italic; text-align: center;”>@ingridrd   Wow! That’s so cool! </span>

@catwing  @daughteroftheking @kaya-young @notawriter

Here’s another one I made for a character from my Superhero WIP…she’s one of my favorite characters, though I don’t yet know her as well as some of the others.  🙂

@jenwriter17  I know this a late response, but I have had this same “issue” (if you can call it that).  🙂  It has bothered me that I can’t get past a certain number of words for a story.  What I’ve come to realize is that I just need to write what is necessary.  If my story is finished in 30,000 words, so be it!  And the next round of editi…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  OH, gotcha!  I totally get it.  Thanks for your willingness.  🙂