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@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! How about you make mention that Jack had woken Daniel up or something? Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering which brother is the MC.

“Thieves?”
“No.” It couldn’t be that. The…

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@perfectfifths *falls off chair and chokes laughing* I’m an elf, okay? This Galaxy stuff is beyond me.

@Dragon-snapper The only writing contest I ever knew about was Patrick Henry College’s “A Call to Pens”, but they’re not doing it this year, so…sorry. I know I’m not helpful.

*snickers* I am one with the 4th, the 4th is with me. May the 4th be with you all!!!

Happy Star Wars day, everyone! May the 4th be with you!
@perfectfifths @daeus @kate-flournoy @all of the star wars fans!

@dragon-snapper Lol!! Zikers, that was perfectly timed. XD

*shakes head* You guys… XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 YAY!!! *tackles you and smothers you in blankets and pillows* We knew you could do it! Way to go! *fuscia confetti*

@that_writer_girl_99 *raises eyebrows* Don’t you ‘but mom’ me! Go to your room, or I’ll melt the pictures and your chair.

@Dragon-Snapper lol! XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 nope. Not yet. I want to get him good and proper in my head before I try it. 😉

@anne-of-lothlorien @kate-flournoy @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99
*motherly voice* If you all don’t share your toys, I’ll take it away from you, the easy way or the hard way. Easy way is that you just share it, the hard way is I melt the pictures and no one has them. Be nice. 😛
😉

@Anne-Of-Lothlorien too late. 😀

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. And thoughts are actually the least necessary of those three. Oftentimes I just cut them out and let the actions tell the story. Emotions and actions go a long way to cluing people in on what someone’s thinking. 😉 😛

Yeah… maybe it means easy as eating pie? XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *hugs you*

@that_writer_girl_99 What about the beginning confused you? What do you think could be done to make it more clear?

@elly I’m sorry for my lateness. I guess you could say that I’m toast. 😛
Anyways…welcome to the forum, enjoy the fun, and watch out for dragons. 😛

@lola-jane I’m late…*sniff sniff* I’m sorry.
Anyways…HELLO! *blows you away with giant dragon hello!*
Do you play any instruments?