@leumeister
Active 6 years, 10 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Snapper replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien This is great!!! You’re character in Ali is great! Even from the beginning I feel terrible that she has to go through that with her family. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl Same! I’ve got to work on my English assignment now, but just had to say something.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper That was great! I think adding that new paragraph at the beginning was a good idea, because a few people mentioned they were confused at the beginning. Great job! I didn’t notice anything that might need editing 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose I’m done for now. I made some edits to my short story.
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi guys! The story is due in a few days, (the 16th), though I want to turn it in by tomorrow. 😛 Anything I’m missing from this revised draft? (The editors said I should work more on character, so if you see anything that might be able to make it deeper, let me know.) Thanks!
@daeus @kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield @perfectfifths @winter-rose @ethr…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose If you’re still there, I’m editing.
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I can’t honestly say, because my own blog is my ideal blog. It blends the topic of story and Christianity/philosophy/opinion articles with some fitness on the side. I sort of want it to be like the Nerdwriter Youtube channel which I think is just totally awesome.
But as for topics, I honestly love philosophical musings and a…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Late? That wasn’t even a whole day! You’re fine. Besides, we humor our mothers. Especially near Mother’s Day. It’s the least we can do. 😀
And movies are good. XDGreat, I’ll keep praying!
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@sleepwalkingMK Sorry it took so long, but here is Joshua.

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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Yo @emily-d! I’m currently writing an article on this very topic that will hopefully be published by KingdomPen. The topic of the month of June is Science Fiction so that’s when my article will (fingers crossed) be published.
Right now, all I can say is quality over quantity. Research the genre, analyze books, break down movies, talk to people .…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Personally . . . don’t care because I don’t notice. If the book is riveting enough, then I don’t notice. I do notice if the book is a bore. So do what you want. I wouldn’t if I’m pressed for time, bu that’s just me.
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Snapper replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@emily-d 😀 I’m asking myself the same question.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@aysia-serene Yeah, I’ll re-compile the list. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper I don’t mind when there are chapter titles in books. I don’t make chapter titles for mine, simply because I can’t really be bothered thinking of any. Really, it’s up to the person writing if they want to add chapter titles – I don’t think it adds or takes anything away from the story 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
What?! @Dragon-Snapper
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m not gonna risk editing my post. It might disappear. 😛 So, @Dragon-Snapper—see above.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@DragonSnapper Chapter titles all the way! But only if they’re good ones. Which the standard for would vary with different people. 😛 No blatant spoilers, and only titles that make sense. I love good chapter titles, but if they’re dull and irrelevant then I’d rather not see them at all. When you do have chapter titles, aside from it providing…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Alia, great. 😀
@ClaireC Sure thing!
Oh wait, it happened today…I haven’t been on KP the last several days. 😛 Oh well. Hope you did great!@That_Writer_Girl_99 Oooh, not good at all. I’ll be praying.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal Aaaahhh! Whoa.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal *raises hand* I’ve read Treasure Island! Kidnapped is better though. 😉 All for Alan.
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