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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Also…
Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.
Chapter 27
Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️
OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTONIt’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn
It almost made me cry but…
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Esther replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Popping in again to let y’all know that I’m seeing all these prayer requests and praying for them! <33
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve into the despair a bit more, but other than that everything is good.
Thank you!
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 24
Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.
How can anything go b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.
Thank you so much!!
A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Be careful out there, fellow writers 👀😂
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Hey Sara!
How’s your mom doing? And how are you doing with everything going on? -
Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks for asking! I almost forgot, lol.
We got our whole HVAC system and water heater replaced Monday and Tuesday. So we had to drop a chunk of cash on that, but at least it’s done and we won’t have to worry about figuring out how to fix it!
Thanks for praying, y’all! <3
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Finishing at :20! I actually can’t believe I wrote for an hour after so long of a break! I guess I missed it, lol XD Got 1,340 words
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Starting at :25 and aiming to go until :50! Gotta get some writing in.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
And apparently our water heater is messed up too? 😭
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
Couple things that I’d appreciated y’all’s prayers for…
First, my volleyball tryouts are tomorrow!! A little nervous about that. Just pray that I’d do my best and stay humble.
Also our AC unit is acting up. 😖 And it’s annoying cuz we kinda need AC and we had to fix our furnace this past winter bc it broke down. So prayers for patience and…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
@rae Praying for you! 🙏🏻🩷
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
Aww, sorry girl! 😢 I’ll be praying for you throughout my evening. <33
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
I love the smorgasbord of emotions slapped into this post 🤣
I was just thinking about it last night in bed and i realized that what you pointed out about Easton isn’t a huge part of his character arc as far as…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.
And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
❤️❤️❤️
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