LandriC

@thearcaneaxiom

Oooooh, cool! I love it! It’s like ocean waves, or morphed stars…

*me reading through this and realizing ‘morphed stars’ makes no sense* 😅🤣

@thearcaneaxiom

That looks really cool!! 😄

Whatever it is… 😂 Maybe it’s a flower??? Idk. XD

@landric

I love this!! And girl, you are great at description!! I could picture everything so perfectly!! 😄👏 Wonderful job!

There are a few things I would tweak though.

Together they raced up another flight of stairs, feeling their way in the dark, flying around corners (Emma lost her shoes around the third one) in search of an open door.

So,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 💕💕

@felicity Aw, four sisters, what a blessing! 💗

Lol the ironies of a writer’s life 😅

@landric

Girl, no kidding, I’m smiling so much right now. 😄😊 You’re so sweet!! 🥰 Your feedback is super encouraging. ☺️

Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….

For real!! I was so happy when I found these names. Plus, they have meaning, which I always love. 😏 Amatus means “beloved.…[Read more]

@landric Oh goodness I love this so much. I can totally see the story and the whole aesthetic come to life!! Totally didn’t see the spy twist coming but it was superb. Gosh no, don’t you dare scrap this story, I want to see more! However, I do agree with @kyronthearcanin I think separate stories is the way to go. Who knows, you might be able to…[Read more]

@esther-c Amen and amen!! Happy Resurrection Sunday to you all as well, I hope y’all have a blessed day 🙂

@landric

Definitely do not scrap it!!! 😅🤣 It’s way too good to scrap. Use it in something, make it its own something, but just don’t get rid of it. You never know when you might use it.

Hmmm… I think maybe do them separately? I like the characters and think it would be good to see more of them. If you did it all in one, it would be strange to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Happy Easter!!! 😃🎉

The anniversary of His victory!

@loopylin

Alrighty! 😀

@y’all

I’ll make the doc on Monday. Cuz I forgot to yesterday and ya know, today’s Easter. 😁

@landric

Ahh!!!! 😆 Thank you so much!!! 🥰

That means a lot, especially knowing that my prose was spot on, cuz that’s big struggle of mine. 😅😊😄

@landric

Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃

I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.

Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Thanks! Quelin was the first one I ever actually drew. 🙂

@landric

Thanks so much! I was hoping the healing was at least somewhat realistic, but all I know comes from watching random vet shows… I’m glad you could picture everything well! That’s something I’ve been working on a lot recently, so it helps to know someone can. 😅🤣

@loopylin

Oh, don’t worry about it! I honestly wasn’t sure if I was forgetting something. You’re totally fine.

And happy Easter!!! 😃🎉🎉🎉

@thearcaneaxiom

No problem!

Yeah, her powers are very limited so far. The idea is that this general time is when all their powers are beginning to really develop. So yeah, that’s just the small part, and shifting reality is the end result, though it takes tons of energy for her to do so. I’ve never read the Reckoners series, but I’ve been…[Read more]